Christmas Story

XlVI_X_I_ZETHOR_I_X_IVlX said:
Tanked said:
I have a Christmas story. No pictures though - based on a scary story but T'was revamped. (based on a true story)

It's was the 24th of December and Lucy's family were going up to California, she packed her bags with 2 months worth of clothes, even though they were only there for a week. Lucy was 14 and always had a terrible paranoia, one that overwhelmed her every single day, if someone she didn't know drove down the street she would tell her parents. Her parents took her to a phycologist and she said that it was perfectly normal.

Lucy jumped in the car and popped her headphones in, listening to some Bruno Mars, her favorite artist. Her mum and dad, Amy and Adam, were in the front seats. Adam started the car and put the radio on, he put on the news was listening to the weather forecast. Lucy pumped her music up and rested her head against the seat belt. Within 10 seconds Lucy was asleep.

Lucy wakes up after they had been driving for 12 hours and they were just about to enter California, she rubbed her eyes and looked around. Her parents looked distraught and Lucy asked them "Whats wrong?"
"Nothing Hun, just we think we have a flat tire", replied Amy.
"Oh ok, I thought something bad happened!"
She looks at her phone and it says 9am, December 25th.
"Woah, Merry Christmas Mum and Dad!" Lucy exclaimed.
Only Amy replied with a brief "Merry Christmas too".
Suddenly the tires got caught on an caked ice, they slide and smashed into the side of the cliff face, distressed Lucy took off her seatbelt and got out, opened her mums door and tried to drag her out, her mums breathing was extremely shallow and had a large gash along her head. Her dad got out and took her mum out of the car.
"Lucy stay in the car until I come back, I'll try to get help"
Lucy sat in the car and put the radio back on, she tried to relax herself but couldn't, she started hyperventilating.

45 minutes passed and Lucy looked in the rear view mirror.
"Come on, come on where are you, hurry up dad please" she whispers.
She looks again and a figure emerges from the falling snow, "Finally!" Lucy exclaims. As the figure gets close she sees it not her dad and he has 2 things in his hands, and a bulge in his pocket. Lucy locks the front doors and the back and starts getting scared. The figure comes up the window dressed in a Santa suit, he had a creepy smile from ear to ear and a cut around his throat. He lifts up his right hand and Lucy's dads cut off head is there, gripped by his hair the mad man places it on the windscreen, in the other hand is her mothers, which is also placed on the windscreen. He removes the bulge in his pocket, she's looks at his hand, her eyes full of fear...

He has the car keys.
"Merry Christmas" the man shouts, and repeats it three times.
"Merry Christmas" he whispers for the last time that Lucy will hear.



Merry Christmas.
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Nice redone copy pasta. Seen this before.
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Oh really stupid? Proved my point to everyone
 
luckstar said:
XlVI_X_I_ZETHOR_I_X_IVlX said:
Tanked said:
I have a Christmas story. No pictures though - based on a scary story but T'was revamped. (based on a true story)

It's was the 24th of December and Lucy's family were going up to California, she packed her bags with 2 months worth of clothes, even though they were only there for a week. Lucy was 14 and always had a terrible paranoia, one that overwhelmed her every single day, if someone she didn't know drove down the street she would tell her parents. Her parents took her to a phycologist and she said that it was perfectly normal.

Lucy jumped in the car and popped her headphones in, listening to some Bruno Mars, her favorite artist. Her mum and dad, Amy and Adam, were in the front seats. Adam started the car and put the radio on, he put on the news was listening to the weather forecast. Lucy pumped her music up and rested her head against the seat belt. Within 10 seconds Lucy was asleep.

Lucy wakes up after they had been driving for 12 hours and they were just about to enter California, she rubbed her eyes and looked around. Her parents looked distraught and Lucy asked them "Whats wrong?"
"Nothing Hun, just we think we have a flat tire", replied Amy.
"Oh ok, I thought something bad happened!"
She looks at her phone and it says 9am, December 25th.
"Woah, Merry Christmas Mum and Dad!" Lucy exclaimed.
Only Amy replied with a brief "Merry Christmas too".
Suddenly the tires got caught on an caked ice, they slide and smashed into the side of the cliff face, distressed Lucy took off her seatbelt and got out, opened her mums door and tried to drag her out, her mums breathing was extremely shallow and had a large gash along her head. Her dad got out and took her mum out of the car.
"Lucy stay in the car until I come back, I'll try to get help"
Lucy sat in the car and put the radio back on, she tried to relax herself but couldn't, she started hyperventilating.

45 minutes passed and Lucy looked in the rear view mirror.
"Come on, come on where are you, hurry up dad please" she whispers.
She looks again and a figure emerges from the falling snow, "Finally!" Lucy exclaims. As the figure gets close she sees it not her dad and he has 2 things in his hands, and a bulge in his pocket. Lucy locks the front doors and the back and starts getting scared. The figure comes up the window dressed in a Santa suit, he had a creepy smile from ear to ear and a cut around his throat. He lifts up his right hand and Lucy's dads cut off head is there, gripped by his hair the mad man places it on the windscreen, in the other hand is her mothers, which is also placed on the windscreen. He removes the bulge in his pocket, she's looks at his hand, her eyes full of fear...

He has the car keys.
"Merry Christmas" the man shouts, and repeats it three times.
"Merry Christmas" he whispers for the last time that Lucy will hear.



Merry Christmas.
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Nice redone copy pasta. Seen this before.
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Oh really stupid?
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Stupid? Are you intoxicated?

This is not the OP. And as you noticed, I denounced it as a copy pasta.
 
luckstar said:
Let's go back to page 6, where ​ Zeth quotes the whole op and makes not even 1 sentence comment. Reason for quoting whole op please? Other than you are a moron and need help
Nm. After reading this knuckle dragging fools last post above me, I understand. No woman in his life and best friend is his right hand. Makes perfect sense now. Enjoy yourself hand washer.
I see you may have a GF opportunity with girl who drunk on whiskey. Go for it dude. 9 out of 10 you got a shot. And 100% of VD also lol
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Sounds like ur speaking from experience on the VD situation
 
XlVI_X_I_ZETHOR_I_X_IVlX said:
-Zeths Lovely Edits said:
"I want a little toy horse on wheels, so I can put my doll on it and roll it around like a princess, and a little turtle and an aquarium. Not too big though, just with one gold fish in it."

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The Little girl was sitting on Santa's lap, smiling as she kept talking in a rush.
"I don't like chocolate cake. I want vanilla one with lots of icing. Oh, and a carriage for my doll. And I want a tea set so I can have tea parties."

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She kept talking, pulling a little on Santa's fake beard, moving it away from her face. She was talking for a couple of hours already. The clock at the mall was showing 10:30 pm, The line to Santa's village disappearing as disgruntled parents left with their kids, unable to get their turn. Stores closed and the mall slowly emptied. Yet the girl kept talking.
"A new watch with Care Bears on it. Sunshine bear is my favorite. And I then I want-" The girl suddenly stopped as she felt a man's hand gripping her by her little leg. "What are you doing?" She looked at Santa in surprise.
"Hahahaha..." A cold deep laugh echoed through the empty mall, as Santa pulled down his beard. A face with beady eyes and lips stretched in a green, yellow, crooked smile were staring back at her. The grip on her leg increased slightly.

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"What are you doing?" she asked, "You are Santa! You are supposed to be good!" The girl struggled against his red coat, trying to get free from the painful grip.
"What do you think?" he sneered, "That you are the only one with wants? Santa wants something too..." His face drew closer to hers, so close that she could smell the rot in his breath, as the grip on her leg became stronger, painful, unbearable.
The emptiness of the mall echoed the sound of a snapping bone, a sound that one cannot forget. The sound was followed by... nothing. No scream.
Blood poured on white trimming of Santa's coat as the girl squeezed his neck. His eyes were glazed over, and his head hung unnaturally to the side.
"Bad Santa!" said the girl. Another movement of the little hand snapped his head backwards. The girl stood up and wiped her hands on his coat, Then she skipped down the hall towards the exit, toward a security guard at the front.
"Hey! Where are your parents?" The security guard tried to get her attention, raising his voice. "Wait, it's cold outside. Don't you have a coat?"
The girl turned around and cheerfully said, "I don't have parents. I killed them. I live with my brother. I am going to meet him soon." A cold breeze rushed through the mall as she opened the door, unhindered by the hilariously incompetent security guard. The doors slammed behind her, locked.


Share YOUR Christmas story :p

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THIS is where I quoted the whole OP, fixing every grammar mistake for the sake of enraging Lili and apparently yourself. I guess I succeeded.
 
I am not a grammar nazi like you and can move on. You with OCD and other problems who have to point out, well, be happy with yourself. Barbie seems like a good match for you btw
 
luckstar said:
I am not a grammar ​ like you and can move on. You with OCD and other problems who have to point out, well, be happy with yourself. Barbie seems like a good match for you btw
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Keep saying the same things over and over again. I'm done reading insults with a nine year old who is upset over photos I have posted, and OP's that I have jokingly fixed.

You have the intelligence of a rock. An easily offended rock that has no basis for being offended. Good night you illiterate.
 
Let's see some more Zeth pics please to make us all like him. Yep, that's the ticket to win ppl's attn in kaw
And ones where you have to defend yourself saying they are real. Then add ones with a so called brother to make us all think they really are real. Omg you cry for attn far too much
 
luckstar said:
I am not a grammar ​ like you and can move on. You with OCD and other problems who have to point out, well, be happy with yourself. Barbie seems like a good match for you btw
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Completely sexist! If he had been a chick you would not make such accusations. And you don't even know my sexual preference! Maybe Zeth has you sexually confused and that is why youre being rude unprovoked. Scared to come out of the closet so you resort to insulting people randomly on tap tap games. Such a big strong man like Roni with a brain even less substantial that LiLi nonexistent ass.
 
And ppl like you washed up player who changed names, then posted pics on Ashes pic thread as a blonde. You are so fake, and everyone knows it
 
luckstar said:
Let's see some more Zeth pics please to make us all like him. Yep, that's the ticket to win ppl's attn in kaw
And ones where you have to defend yourself saying they are real. Then add ones with a so called brother to make us all think they really are real. Omg you cry for attn far too much
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This isn't all a cry for attention??? Uh huh.

I don't need to prove to anybody who I am. And if posting a picture of myself in Forums is triggering you, you should go attack everybody on that thread too. This again leads me to think you are meaninglessly angry, and therefore not worthy of my time.

Rest easy. Try not to rage too much.
 
Lol I've never posted a pic of myself on forums  I change my hair colors with the seasons so I haven't been blonde since early 2015 

You're stories are about as accurate as Ronis 
 
Yes you did washed up Barbie, and you were called out on it being a fake. Deny all you want, it's already been proven you are a liar. Enjoy. As for Zeth, he likes to post pics and get attn in forums. Where have you ever seen me in 5 yrs seek attn? I'm calling out liars and attn seekers ATM. And I have valid reason to. Both of which you fit into
 
Hmmmmmm known liar? What have I lied about. I'm extremely honest to a fault and forthcoming 

I've never posted pics of myself on threads


You seem jealous of others that like who they are.
 
... Ashes included gifs "of me" in a significant amount of his threads. But as I have said twice already, I HAVE NEVER POSTED A PIC OF MYSELF IN ANY THREAD. Do you think you have the capability to comprehend simple English? Or do I need to find someone that can translate it into "Village Idiot" so you understand?
 
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