Broken World

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by AVentura123, Apr 3, 2015.

  1. Re: The Flaming sword

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    Chapter 3
    Arguement

    "Come on, tell me, what really happened there?!" Dev exclaimed as they reach the bottom of the arena.

    "Do you really want to know?" Vin ask with a mischievous smile. "Of course I want to! Why would I ask such a thing that I even didn't want to know?!" Dev exclaimed once more.

    "Follow me." Vin said as he pull Dev's wrist to pull him out of the arena while Hero just followed through them. "Hey! Tell me what's this all about!" Dev protested but Vin just keep pulling his wrist until they reached the outside of the arena. Dev pulled his wrist away and protested at him,

    "Hey! Can you please tell me if why are you pulling me like a dog!" Hero and Vin smiled before he said a word, "Just follow us." Dev groaned in annoyance and followed them at the other side of the arena. He had no idea if why they were keep smiling mysteriously like, they know something that he didn't. It makes him annoy more since, he was the only one who didn't knew it. They run around the arena until they reached the back of the arena, Dev was surprised to see the competitor with the three of their friends, Dave, Karro and Vampy.

    "Hey! How did you get here that fast?! And why is that man here?!" Dev shouted at them with his eyes widened.

    "Let's just say that, we have been inside of that arena for about 15 minutes and... You already know if what happened next." Karro said but Dev just stared at them, annoyed.

    "But why did you save that man?! Did you know if what jeopardy he will bring to us?!" Dev exclaimed with angry stare to the competitor.

    "Why? What do you want to happen to him? Die?!" Dave protested but Dev just turn around and walked away. Dave didn't do anything about it so he just ignore his anger and ask the competitor,

    "Are you alright?" he smiled back at him and answered,

    "Yes, I'm fine. Thank you for saving me." he answered back.

    "Maybe you should stick with us for now while you are healing yourself." Dave offered kindly as he help him stand up on his feet. He put his arm in his back neck and guide him away from the arena.


    They walk away from the arena until the distance is far enough for the people to find them. Dave helped the man lean on the tree to rest. They stopped by in that place and talk about the man. Hero wander around to gather some herbs for his cuts while the rest just stay and remained silent. Dev sit straight, cross-arm and wait for them to say a word. They just kept looking at each other, avoiding each stare, until Dev ask them, "So, what now? What will we do to him?" They thought for a moment until Dave ask the man, "What's your name by the way?" he smiled at him before he introduce himself politely, "My name's Tekrad Delkiok, one of the sorcerers of the Sekrain bloodline. And, thank you for saving me too. Sorry if I can't thank more than that." Dave smiled back at him and scratch the back of his neck in embarrassment, "Don't mind about that too much, we just did the right thing." he said.

    "By the way, where did you get that powers from?" he asked.

    "Our bloodline had an electric powers so it was just natural." he answered.

    "But, did you manage to control it easily?" Dave asked.

    "I am just an apprentice actually, but..." he replied but he paused for a while to think of another way to explain his answer.

    "Why? What happened?" Dave ask him out. Tekrad let out a deep breath and he say it straight to the point.

    "My master, had passed away." he whispered sadly. They remain silent once more as a respect for his master's death. They didn't know of what to say about it. It was just a normal talk until he remembered that, sad memory.

    "Um, sorry for-" Tekrad cut his sentence before he could even finish it.

    "No it's fine, I had get over it anyway." he said. Dave seemed unsure if he should continue the talk or not...

    "How about you? What are you going to do after watching us in the arena?" Tekrad asked.

    "Nothing, just searching for a town to buy some goods, and find some quests while we're there." he answered.

    "We're just travelers, but you can also call us adventurers since we take tasks and discover such things." Hero answered as he walked near them, holding a sack in his other hand. "What's inside that sack?" Tekrad asked.

    "A rabbit for our meal." Dev answered. They all look at Dev, who was leaning in the tree with his leg crossed. "What do you expect?"

    "Nevermind him, he's just goofing around." Dave whispered to Tekrad.

    "No worries, I met a lot of him when I am traveling with my master." he answered back. Hero bring the sack down and he sat near to it as he open it. "By the way, why are you in the arena?" Dave asked once more.

    "I am actually finding for something. Before my master died, he told me to find the Arkeusd, because it was once owned by our bloodline. He was finding for it in ages, but it didn't took him alive to found it." Tekrad told him.

    "What's the point of-" Karro elbowed Dev before he could even finish talking.

    "But did you find it? Karro asked.

    "Yes I did. The bad news is, it costs a lot." he answered.

    "So that's why you join the arena right?" Dave asked.

    "Yes. But sadly, I lost the fight." he answered sadly. Dave pat him on the back

    (unfinished)
     
  2. Re: The Flaming sword

    tl;dr
     
  3. Re: The Flaming sword

    ?
     
  4. Re: The Flaming sword

    Didn't read but gj person.
     
  5. Re: The Flaming sword

    You stupid lowlife Turkey. Somebody put some effort to make a story and you post that to try and make yourself look good. Well.. You look stupid you rotten pig.
     
  6. Re: The Flaming sword

    How do you know it's boring if you didn't read it you imbecile?
     
  7. Re: The Flaming sword

    Support
     
  8. Re: The Flaming sword

    The title bore me. "the flaming sword"
     
  9. Re: The Flaming sword

    You look stupid for calling people rotten pigs on a video game, all due to someone saying lock on a, well useless thread.
     
  10. Re: The Flaming sword

    I'll change it :)
     
  11. Re: The Flaming sword

    Reserved
     
  12. Re: The Flaming sword

    Well it was up to the mod if he/she will lock this. And, did you notice that there are a Fan-fiction in the forums?
     
  13. Re: Broken Blade

    Yes, yes I did, but in all honesty, of the thousands of forumers, I bet maybe 4-5 people actually opened this and read it, the only reason I posted Here is to see how many noobs would hate my posts
     
  14. Re: Broken Blade

    Why would that need to be counted? You don't care about them anyway, I mean us. Don't waste your time here if you will not even read it.
     
  15. Re: Broken Blade

    Haha its fun tho. Gives me new targets to practice on
     
  16. Re: Broken Blade

    We are not ragdolls!
     
  17. Re: Useless Tears

    Who's we? I'm not specifically hitting you am I?
     
  18. Re: Useless Tears

    I don't care if you're not hitting me. But I do care if you use my thread as a battle list!
     
  19. Re: Useless Tears

    Hey, alaissa, ignore 404, he is a prime example of an assclown.just write the next part. :)
     
  20. Re: Useless Tears

    Pls don't reply if there are 10 replies in one page (including my story)... And thanks for that Izuel :)