Broken: Feedback/Misc. Disscussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jan 23, 2011.

  1. x.x

    I...can't....

    What if I post another story that I posted elsewhere. One never seen by Kaw before. Would that satisfy y'all for a day or two? It only has three chapters and the blurb you put on the back of a book, but it's not incredibly horrible...
     
  2. Haha a summary you mean? And maybe haha. What genre?

    iZaln
     
  3. Sure, if that's what you want to call it.

    And Fantasy. What else?

    Its called The Bounty Huntress.

    The character I used for Feather's Book was based off of her. But they're pretty different in the way each author portrayed her.
     
  4. Ah I see lol. So is this how you practiced writing Irin as a bounty hunter?

    iZaln
     
  5. Um...no. Remember, Irin is in the service of the queen. She's not a bounty hunter. Duh.

    To post, or not to post...that is the question....
     
  6. Geez lol. Well then "assassin" lol.

    And the question is to quote correctly or not to quote >.>

    iZaln
     
  7. Any feedback thread for it?

    iZaln
     
  8. I meant the Bounty Huntress story.

    iZaln
     
  9. Hold yer horses, will ya?!? Rome wasn't built in a day.
     
  10. This chapter has almost no content at all, and I am thoroughly disappointed in it.

    But I can't take it anymore.
     
  11. It was good. Shows the relationship between the two. And is he making a bucket list?!

    iZaln
     
  12. Thanks. That was one of the intentions, but I was also supposed to tell you what the plan was. I'm just in a very deep philosophically emotional state right now. (In other words, I was too lazy to write any more of the damn chapter)

    (ten and eleven are ganging up on me)

    And bucket list? Really? Lol, no. Weren't you listening? It was a list of demands.

    Also, to anyone who bothers to read this, if I gave you a choice of learning about the 'Dark Plans' Sentax has, or going back to Irin's POV, which would you choose?
     
  13. Idc whichever takes the shortest!

    You know what'd be awesome? If the blue eyed guy was renethon, or a family member of his 
     
  14. America's got talent! Lol Love You America!

    iZaln
     
  15. Aw man, wish I'd thought of that. That would be awesome. Unfortunately I have other plans...
     
  16. One can only imagine lol

    iZ
     
  17. Yep, you guys don't want to know. The inside of my mind is filled with things like Irin trying to think in her depressed state. It's actually quite philosophical.
     
  18. is all I can do. Great chapter