Broken: Feedback/Misc. Disscussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jan 23, 2011.

  1. Iriiin.... I haz Cheeeeeeesecake
     
  2. Bump for cheesecake
     
  3. Bump for I (insert smiley with cool glasses)
     
  4. Cheesecake..? But...that's not fair! You KNOW I cant resist cheesecake. Fine. How about if I give a sneak peek???

    "I've located one of the stones." Niri said, his face serious, almost grave.

    "You can locate them?" I said, completely shocked. I wanted to know how this locating thing worked. It'd sure make my job a hell of a lot easier.

    Niri glared at me, and I realized I had missed the point. "Never mind that," he said. "Focus on the stone itself."

    "Right...so where is?"

    Niri frowned. "That's the thing. It's...It's in Arlem."

    "What? Arlem...You...you mean the Arlem? Are you mad! No way I'm crossing the borders! Do you know what they'd do to me?"

    Niri snickered then, which was totally inappropriate. He looked at me with a crooked smile and one eyebrow raised. "Then don't tell them who you are."

    "Niri...I'm not good at this kind of thing…" I said shaking my head.

    "Nonsense." He said, then set off for the other side of my room. "It's only a little undercover adventure." He tried to make light of it, but I could tell he was as nervous as I was.

    "That's the thing." I said as I followed him. "I've never gone undercover before. Whenever we do these sort of things, I'm always the backup. Fighting, that's what I'm good at. My people skills? They're all but nonexistent."

    "You're telling me." he snorted.


    Please note that this isnt the next chapter. It's just proof that I've been working on it. This will likely be in the next 5 or so chapters.

    Also..

    I absolutely love it when Irin and Niri argue! XD
     
  5. That means you're ready to post more rite?
     
  6. Ermmmm...no. I'm sorry. I'm just going to be really busey for awhile. But I haven't forgotten about you guys. I've been working on certain important scenes.
     
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  8. awww...there isn't going to be more soon? :cry:
     
  9. Aww man...way to make me feel guilty guys.

    Alright...I'm not promising anything but I'll TRY to get something out by the end of the weekend.
     
  10. YAY!! GO IRIN!!

    hehe :twisted:
     
  11. I need your help Irin...