Broken: Feedback/Misc. Disscussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jan 23, 2011.

  1. @Karl, a summary might be difficult because of all my subplots, but basically Irin, my lead girl, has to find 7 magical Stones before Sentax, evil guy does. If anyone feels they can do a better job, go right ahead.

    And I promise to roll out more soon.
     
  2. Some guy whose name starts with R liked her, kissed her, and she tossed him off till he died then she went all sad and emo on the world in the end of the first book. Theres also a random dude bamed niri in the plot thats there only when absolutely necessary, in dreams, or just to annoy her. And theres a plot to take over a king somewhere.
     
  3. Beautiful. that's going on the back of my book.
     
  4. Lmao irin. Ill take a mere 75% royalties for that
     
  5. Although i think 75% equals to free
     
  6. How about I'll just give you a free copy if this ever gets published. In the meantime, here's a complimentary imaginary pen.
     
  7. Sounds good. AND OMG YES! AHAHAHA all yall suckas dont have an imaginary pen
     
  8. Write more pls pls pls pls pls btw give me the pen or I shoot
     
  9. Shooting wont matter. The pen is a force shoeld that protects all the innocent when irin is busy so im INVINSIBLE and u cant have it
     
  10. Sneaks into orda's house while sleeping and steals pen.btw when is the next post coming?
     
  11. Well, I am the Defender of the Innocent, am i not? Here webs, take this one and give the other back to ordo.

    Next Post....lets see... Ihave been working on Broken, but nothing new. I've been editing a bit and working out some plot details. I honostly don't know when I'm gonna roll out a new update. School must come first after all. I want to say expect something by the end of the month. But I'm not even sure on that since my plot is still all messed up, so you might have to settle for a chapter on the Bounty Huntress instead. We'll see.

    And here is just a shout out to all my lovely readers, THANK YOU! This wouldn't be possible without you guys. =)
     
  12. Thanks for the tech pen.*gives orda back his a month till more writting *faints*
     
  13. Finally wakes up reads above post and faints again
     
  14. Bump to make irin write faster(soon I might have to resort to threats)