Broken: Feedback/Misc. Disscussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jan 23, 2011.

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  1. ...alright then....
     
    #221 *Irin (01), Aug 28, 2011
  2. Which***
     
    #222 *iPimella (01), Aug 28, 2011
  3. Yeah, sorry. I didn't edit. At all. And it was early in the morning when I wrote that. So...yeah, sorry for the errors.
     
    #223 *Irin (01), Aug 28, 2011
  4. No I mean on your post in here telling about the new chapter
     
    #224 *iPimella (01), Aug 28, 2011
  5. Nice! This is getting better and better!
     
    #225 Storallelite, Aug 29, 2011
  6. @Ella, thanks. Didnt notice that.

    @Stora, thanks! Not sure when the next chapter is coming, but it definitely will be from Irin's POV.
     
    #226 *Irin (01), Aug 29, 2011
  7. For the first time in awhile, I'm reasonably pleased with my work.
     
    #227 *Irin (01), Sep 1, 2011
  8. Ooh...I really thought Irin was going to get it๎
    ๎€Ž
     
    #228 Storallelite, Sep 1, 2011
  9. Good. That means I'm doing my job. And thanks!๎–

    What do you think of Tarron?
     
    #229 *Irin (01), Sep 1, 2011
  10. I cant believe this chapter was up 4 a week before i realized anyway great new chapter I was laughing and crying with pity for irin the whole time PS: I cant wait for her to crack
     
    #230 *webs (01), Sep 9, 2011
  11. Lol webs.. And hey irin.. Shes saying sje wont break.. Meaning what? I must have missed something.. Or should i read the whole digs over?
     
    #231 Empress_of_Shadows, Sep 9, 2011
  12. Did you read the first book?
     
    #232 *webs (01), Sep 9, 2011
  13. Of course
     
    #233 Empress_of_Shadows, Sep 10, 2011
  14. But i probably forgot parts cause broken went kind of.. Slow posting for a while
     
    #234 Empress_of_Shadows, Sep 10, 2011
  15. Ordo, she kept saying she wounding break because that's when she saw the chair. You know, the one Renethon sat it before he died? She's not over him yet. Its only been 8 days anyways.

    Thanks for reading, guys!
     
    #235 *Irin (01), Sep 10, 2011
  16. MOAR!
     
    #236 *iPimella (01), Sep 10, 2011
  17. I lost track after the first books, first chapter. Can you fill me in with the quick version?
     
    #237 *NecroHyphen (01), Sep 10, 2011
  18. Yea i know that๎• but i guess i didnt draw the connection. Thanks.
     
    #238 Empress_of_Shadows, Sep 10, 2011
  19. more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
     
    #239 *webs (01), Sep 11, 2011
  20. more
     
    #240 *webs (01), Sep 11, 2011
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