Re: Book 3:Battle Royale Epilogue Usaris was steaming.He felt like he was going to blow up.His children had been killed by the rascals.He would either Die or he would win.
Re: Book 3:Battle Royale you're a flaming retard. you're only making an ass out of yourself. you clearly cannot write. not even close. your "books" consist of a few paragraphs each. please give it up. nobody here. even the other wannabe writers here in FF don't even care to see your garbage. that's saying something.
The Author Kingdom The Author Kingdom is a group of friends that share things that they are writing about so other people can read them.You need to respect all writers and if you don't you will be banned.I will ban you first offense.Even if you don't like the story do not say bad comments.If you want to join The Author Kingdom wall me.
Re: Book 3:Battle Royale lol having fun? I don't see how. you couldn't write a decent story to save your life. they are NO good. and nobody here wants to see ANY of it. you put little to no effort into your crap
Re: The Author Kingdom a writer who bans and mention of negative feedback if you didn't like his "stories". haha so I guess nobody will be able to post the fact that you consider yourself an author is funny too
Re: The Author Kingdom Coldplay, you are a noob. Please, leave this place, as you're clearly not fit for even one of the most inn appropriate places for a writing forum.
Re: Book 3:Battle Royale Coldplay, if you want people to respect this crap, go to 4chan. Or r/writing. Or even the shithole we know as Fanfiction.net
Re: Book 3:Battle Royale well, although its really short, it is creative.its kinda good *waits to be trolled*
Re: Book 3:Battle Royale even at a website like that, why in the world would garbage such as this get respected? anybody can just come up with random pieces of story/plots. it's like a "story" randomly made up and told to his parents over dinner at the age of 8.
Book 4:Origins Chapter 1 Coldplay902 was prepped for battle.He had his sword and he was going to use his horse to ride there.It was the dead of night when they left to confront Usaris for the last time.At least they thought so.The plan was to distract the guards and then some people go in and try to kill the troll king.Coldplay902 had to do this for revenge.Then they rode off
Re: Book 4:Origins Chapter 2 When they got there they hopped off the horses and confronted the guards.Then the guards went away and 17 knights made it in.It was a trap.16 knights got killed including Spartan."Nooo"Coldplay902 yelled.Then more knights came in.And most died accept the master.He came into the throne room and Usaris stood up and got his mace.The fight was just beginning.
Re: Book 4:Origins Chapter 3 Usaris swung his mace and broke Coldplay902's sword!He took out his dagger and went in for a attack.Master knight tried to stop him and took a blow to the face!He flew right out the open wall.He was motionless
Re: Book 4:Origins *stands by and wonders why the hell dead knights are everywhere* *leaves to see if calydor is home*