Bleach Fan Fiction

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by bellalautner, May 15, 2011.

  1. I've read every one of these and you should make mangas
     
  2. No you shouldn't make mangas but you are kinda good
     
  3. Aww thxs guys I thought no one reads this lol it helps knowing someone us reading it
     
  4. Bleach Fan Fiction 5

    As Ichigo carried Amehime to Udaharras shop In the Soul Society was confused about why there was a imense amount of spiritual pressure "AKON!" Mayuri yowled "Have you found any research yet?" N..No Captian Mayuri" Akon said " Must I do everything my self" Mayuri said grumbling to himself. In the World of the Living Ichigo had made it to the Udaharra shop he knocked on the door "Hello" Udaharra mumbled still half asleep " Ichigo what are you." he stopped as he say Amehime laying motionless in Ichigos arms. "What happened!" Udaharra ordered as Ichigo told him the story Orrihime was healing Amehime " She's really cold and weak" Orrihime said " It must be from her using too much spiritual pressure" Udaharra murmured "well since shes already half dead we might as well put her through hollowfication"



    Plz comment will write more later
     
  5. Damn while she's sleeping

    Dats just wrong
     
  6. Pls keep posting guys it helps me think of better ideas
     
  7. Bleach Fan Fiction 6

    As they prepared to start the hollowfication on Amehime she was experiencing her seeing her zanpakto in it's human form a tall lanky boy with long light blue hair that covered much of his eyes, one piece of hair reveled his eyes which were a startling blue calm yet soft yet deadly. His eyes danced almost mocking her. "what are you waiting for?" He said "Maybe you don't remember my name is Misoyo.....your zanpakto" His eyes began to look slightly agitated "I know who you are" Amehime said "Beware of the danger that lurks ahead" as her internal world disappeared she saw she was un Udaharras underground basement, just then she realized that she was falling, and what was this chain on her..... "No! She thought how... Why would he do this to her!" as she hit the ground she looked up and saw Ichigos Orange hair Nd she heard Udaharra say "Times wasting" Then above Amehime Ichigo felt a shockwave her hollow mask was trying to form, he could tell she was trying to resist but the power was strong. He saw her attempting to claw her way up but just as she almost made it she collapsed to the ground on a heap. "NO!!" Amehime thought to herself "must make it" just as she reached the top she passed out on the ground Ichigo went to grab her then Amehime's hand grabbed Ichigos and she slammed him into the ground, luckily he was pulling Zangetsu in time "What are you doing Amehime?" then that's when it hit Ichigo he looked at Amehime's usually inviting amber brown eyes and saw yellow eyes seeping over them and just when he jumped back her hollow mask appeared

    Plz rate and comment BLEACH
     
  8. Anyone care to comment!?!?
     
  9. Bleach Fan Fiction 7

    "What! Are you surprised strawberry?" Hollow Amehime said. Ichigos eyes widened "No...No I'm not stop it now!" He said pleadingly "I don't want to hurt you" "Bring it on!" Hollow Amehime said joyfully as she charged at Ichigo. A massive column of dust swirled around them when the dust settled Ichigo just barely blocked her attack, "she moves much faster than before" he thought "she moves faster than my hollow form" As Ichigo pondered about what to do and trying to stay alive Amehime's internal world was going to go through one of it's toughest, most destructive battle yet



    Sorry I couldnt write much plz comment and rate PLZ PLZ PLZ
    thxs
     
  10. out of 5 I would say 4
     
  11. Awww thxs
     
  12. Immature bleach lover what can I say
     
  13. Bleach Fan Fiction 8

    Amehime was in a world that looked much like Kadakura town but it was abandoned "Hello" She said no response then after what felt like hours of walking around she saw him "Misoyo" she whispered " What are you doing here?" she said a little louder "Don't try talking louder no ones here" Misoyo said. Amehime's mind raced she wanted to leave, then she remembered this was her internal world. Before she could ask anything Misoyo said " Good luck" then he disappeared. The scene changed to her school in the field was a person with bright orange hair before she even reached him she cried out "Ichigo!, I was so scared here please take me back!" as the person turned around she realized he was nothing like Ichigo he had a white Zangetsu her eyes widened "Miss me" The Ichigo look alike said "Who are you?" she said shaking " I'm Ichigo kurosakis hollow form, Pleasure to meet you" Ichigos Hollow replied "You will face yourself in a minute be aware if you get killed here you will die" without any smile on his face then he disappeared. Just as he left a girl ran up beside her and slashed her Amehime blocked and rolled over "Prepare to die" She said with a confidence in her eyes as the two dueled it was obvious neither side was getting a clear lead each had slash marks all over them. Just then Amehime hollow form sliced Amehime "What!, Impossible" she said as fell to the ground. Amehime remembered all her friends,Ichigo,Orrihime,Udyu,Chad the Soul Society. As she lay waiting to die she saw Ichigos Hollow form muttering " What a pathetic girl" she saw all her friends crying, she saw Ichigo holding her hand saying he should've never let her do this, Yoruichi crying "NO!" she thought to herself " I can't die" She struggled up holding her Zanpakto " Cry, Misoyo" she said "WHAT! you can't be possibly alive" Her hollow form screeched as she disintegrated into a mask. As Amehime regained consciousness she saw Ichigo, Udaharra and Yuruichi smiling at her. " I was so scared I wasn't going to ever see your guys faces ever again"



    Plz Rate and Comment thxs to all who have commented get your bleach friends and tell them to read this pleases and thank you'd go BLEACH!
     
  14. Plz comment thxs to shinigamichigo and Ichigo2Kurosaki you 2 always read this thanks
     
  15. Also read Core by Shinigamichigo
     
  16. Bella if you keep this up it's gonna be a movie cuz shonen jump is gonna read it