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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Utho (01), Aug 12, 2010.

  1. U better save me


    Or utho is going to meet an untimely end
     
  2. Ya never know! TEEHEE!
     
  3. I will make sure something terrible happens and I will describe every single detail about ur torture
     
  4. Calm down Luke. Also u complain about no readers when it's been like a week since ur last chapter. TYPE IT AND THEY WILL COME
     
  5. Awesome Job!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  6. Awesome story Utho, woohoo I come in! 
     
  7. Bastion, to the rescue!
     
  8. Chapter posted. Sorry it's short
     
  9. My character rocks. And the flying monkey part was funny.
     
  10. I like monkeys that fly!!!!

    And I'm gonna end my story an write something else
     
  11. Lol. I liked typing that part.
     
  12. Chapter posted!
     
  13. Screwed Up
     
  14. I'M GOIN TO VEGAS BABY!!!!


    Good story can't wait to see what is next
     
  15. Lol. Me likey Vegas
     
  16. I want more flying monkeys  jk jk .  las vegas... Ailae is going to love it there! *sarcasm*
     
  17. Lol oh yeah.....
     
  18. Sorry no chapter today but I'll have two tomorrow.