Blackwind Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Utho (01), Aug 12, 2010.

  1. This story... It's intriguing.... I LOVE IT! I attempted a super-power-hero story. I'm not sure about the direction for mine, but Blackwind is awesome. It amazes me in the aspects of a troubling time, but then there is always the confusing good side, like why haven't the Anti-Blackwinds attacked the kids and the rich couple. Anyway, it's a nice story and I'm interested to see where this goes. Another thing is that my real life name is Zachary, so that Zack guy makes me think I'm in the story. I do realize it probably was someone else lol. Anyhow, go for it, I'm reading.

    iZaln
     
  2. Thank you Zaln! That really means a lot. Also the Anti-Blackwinds will do some damage before the end. Don't worry
     
  3. Welcome. And the Anti's will do some damage eh? Hehe I look forward upon how these young kids will fare against... The Anti Blackwind Peeps Federation! Lol I love the name Blackwind.

    iZaln
     
  4. Great job!
     
  5.  as usual, maybe even better
     
  6. good! you might want to explain the powers somewhere because to readers who didnt read the signup thread the are cluelesss.
     
  7. Fine. If you haven't figured them out then here ya go.

    List of Known Abilities:

    Utho- Healing
    Zack- Mind Reading
    Gandalf- Fire
    Kantos- Invisibility
    Rika- Control Luck
    Hope- Speed
    Fish- Control Technology


    You'll find out rest later
     
  8. Will Bjorns power help? Cu it's not as great as every1 else's
     
  9. You'll do your part. Sorry I shot ya though. Lol.
     
  10. That's fine I deserve it for my fail story that barely any1 reads
     
  11. Bjorn!  How many times do I have tell you, your story is awesome!!
     
  12. Pory look on favorite stories thread
     
  13. Awsome story
     
  14. Chapter posted!
     
  15. I thought this chap would be my time to shine






    Then u realized I was shot in the f*cking leg



    Great chap and story utho u rock
     
  16. GlooMi is watching over you poor dying boy lol.