I like how they are so intense on how people write on here! In PIMD EVERYONE'S just like "You are so talented! Good for you!" and they basically support you even if you are a struggling writer! But here they're like "Do this and this and your story won't suck!" and it makes you feel like sh*t!
people say that to struggling writers cos they need the suport (though sometimes they tell them how rubbish they are) but good writers get honest responses because people want to show them how how to improve... be thankful people like it enough to be honest with you.... P.S. love it very sweet and great intro and even though nothing much has happened you understand the main character already