WOAH. No way in hell, unless you are a savant (acquired or not) would a 9 YEAR OLD have this writing ability. I'm sorry if I sound like an ass, but life is that way, and you have me convinced that your "writing" is fraud and a blatant theft of others' intellectual property.
that or he's not really 9. maybe he just claims that trying to get sympathy and additional "atta boy" pats on his back due to age.
This is meant (you guys are taking this the wrong way) to boost her story, because I think she has gone inactive, so I'm basiclly adding my twist, but finishing her story. And yes, I really am 9. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I woke up, and it was almost noon. The first squad members had just started waking up, and the rest were shifting around. I got up, and walked outside, combat boots crunching on the gravel. I saw Hawk walking around, almost looking like he was gliding. The name fits, I thought.
I have news for you: it's not. What it IS doing is you practically just stealing intellectual property, thus sending your reputation in a slow downward spiral. Did I say slow? Slow's not the word. More like too fast to even comprehend. Because seriously, her story is perfectly fine the way it is. It does NOT need a 'boost' from a '9 year old', nor does it need a 'twist' OR to be stolen and rewritten. Sloppily. Sorry, kid. That's the way it is. No sympathy from this small part of the world.
I started writing my first book in fan fiction young like Secret, only not as young. He's ridiculously young. I derailed it on accident though, so... yeah. The only story I ever had a solid outline for was Sound of Blood. Gonna rewrite LoKaW, with advice from cheesemuffin, because I felt I needed a critic with benevolent intentions and because I felt that the story was becoming poor quality.
I would, Feather. But I'm stubborn like that. If nobody brings it up, I won't say anything. But I feel a need to counter anything anyone does say if I feel it is incorrect.
Just read the thing on plagiarism you're supposed to put a citation about lady Marian creating the idea.