Battle camp: The Rescue feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Oct 8, 2010.

  1. Can some1 bump the first part
     
  2. Yay lady Marian is back, I thunk u need to write mire stories :S
     
  3. I've tried writing two stories at once, it doesnt work out
     
  4. Any guesses on what will happen?

    •Will the arrow hit Talon?

    •Will Shorlorn block the arrow?

    •Will everyone get out safely?

    REMINDER- I'm always open to ideas!
     
  5. I'm not open to ideas on chapter eleven though, I'm in the process of writing it.
     
  6. The arrow will graze talon because shorlorn knocks it off course and they will all get captured and escape safely
     
  7. I'm writing this chapter, but I'll make sure they all make it out safely
     
  8. Sorry I haven't written in a while!  I'll get right to ch. 11, and would you like Rora's chapter to be EXTRA long?
     
  9. Okay, I'll try! 
     
  10. New chapter(s)!!!

    TO WHOM IT MY CONCERN:

    I would like to make a fourth book and then be done with the battle camp series.

    BUT DO NOT FRET:

    I am think about making a continuation of this series, there will be different main characters, but those who survive the fourth book, (MWAHAHAHA) will still be in the continuation. They just won't be as big of characters.
     
  11. Wait a second...........where's my burrito.....oh and why does Matthias like rora
     
  12. I wanna hurt someone in a fight
     
  13. @German, I'm afraid I don't know where your burrito is, and you like Rora because I've got an epic end seen in mind, and it's crucial you have feelings for her.



    @Fang, I know you're anxious for a battle, but just wait until the next book (The assault) and I promise you'll get some action. I would give you some action at the end of this book, but I've got to introduce a bad a** girl to my story, who I'm afraid will have to kick your butt. But once she's out of the way, I'll give you some time to hurt the main character of your choice, okay? (get back to me with the character you'd like to hurt)
     
  14. Ok. I just wanna fight. I got three sisters., and 10 years of anger built up inside if me.
     
  15. Lol, I've got two older brothers!;) they used to drive me nuts, but now that they are older they're actually pretty nice.