Battle camp: The Rescue feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Oct 8, 2010.

  1. Wats about me?
     
  2. Wolf is evil too!
     
  3. Mayb were more patriotic than evil.....think about it
     
  4. Nice chapters
     
  5. True German... Very true... But personally I think you're evil! I mean, you kidnapped Rora!
     
  6. We were only listening to the king I mean if we didn't we'd get r heads cut off
     
  7. That doesn't sound fun.
     
  8. U got that right kimber getting ur head chopped off is bad for ur health
     
  9. Yeah! U would have to go in a coffin. They r really stuffy, with NO AC, NO food, NO tv, NO water, NO video games, and most important of all, NO KAW
     
  10. That would be terrible!! ^^
     
  11. I love your books u write
     
  12. Bump it up
     
  13. Abe u really don't hav to bump it when it's on the first or second page once it goes past pg3 bump it
     
  14. New chapter! Sorry for the wait! 
     
  15. Noooo rora can't be dead! And what happened to them all
     
  16. You will see! 
     
  17. I love battle camp :D