Battle camp: The Rescue feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Oct 8, 2010.

  1. Most likely I will post more tomorow, maybe even more today, I'm in a writing mood!
     
  2. I still need story ideas.
     
  3. Ok I need a summary I read the beggining of book 3 and since sym is my gf I want to know what's this all about please and thank u
     
  4. (she told me to read btw)
     
  5. Oh yeah seymor got his bottle of rootbeer so he's calm now 
     
  6. I don't want to release melon, he is dangerous.
     
  7. Here comes a long summary:

    Ok, so talon and co. Are kidnapped into a training center for spies and assassins. They got their memories wiped so they dont remember a thing. They train by day, and spy by night until they've gathered enough information to escape, but when they do, Shadow, leader of the training facility and head spy of the country Trellion, stops them and convinces them to stay. That's book one.

    In book two, four more trainees show up. Wolf, Symphiney, mark, and Matthias. They are actually spies for the country Yedasriam, the country Trellion Is at war with. Sym and Marks brains have Been wiped. The enemy is stronger and smarter than talon and co. At first, but then talon realizes how to beat them and does. Mark finds out he's luke's brother and he get his memories back, symphoney falls in love with Shorlorn and gets her memories back, then Wolf realizes what's going one And kills Shorlorn, and kidnaps Rora. Book two is ended.


    Wow, I did a really crappy job of explaining that, if anyone has anything to add, please do.


    I suggest you read the first and second book:

    Battle camp: the rebellion
    Battle camp: the enemy

    That will Really help you understand.
     
  8. Thanks everyone!
     
  9. I made fan club for the books so post on it if you can it's on the first page of fan fiction so post on it if you can bye
     
  10. I has an idea now!
     
  11. It's great so far, Marian! Keep it up! 
     
  12. Thanks irin! 
     
  13. New chapter up! I'm on a roll today!
     
  14. Thanks irin! It's Symphoneys chapter next!
     
  15. Love it! Especially love the part w/ the horses!