Shadow is an awesome character I like him the best and Syphony or however u say it is also a great character and so is [color=blueish-grey ] Wolf [/color]
That was the coward's way out. Killing off everybody is too easy of an ending. next time try something more complicated. This was not one of your better chapters. The voice was not well carried, the description was poor after the broom closet scene, and you ended it too abruptly. 2nd person is when you're talking to the readers, or during dialogue. an example woudl be like You may think that I did wrong, but you're wrong. You should know better than to think that this story would end happily, and I'm sure you've read enough books in which every ending is perfect." A few examples of this would be The Series of Unfortunate Events, when the author breaks off into telling you to put the book down, or The Book Thief in which death is talking to you and explaining things
I'm not satisfied with the ending either. I just wanted to finish it. I think I'll try a few other endings and post the one I like best. Not today, I'm tired... Wait... Maybe today... Ugh my mind is so foggy!;( I didn't want to kill everyone at first... Maybe I'll try my first idea for an ending.
TO ALL FANS: I hope you liked the battle camp series! This is not the end of my writing on KaW, I will be posting a sign up either on Monday or Tuesday afternoon, so keep your eyes peeled for it! X's and O's, Lady
For my next sign up? Umm... It might not be your style wolf... But then again, theres always the villans. I want to tell you more, but I can't!
Did I go back to the futuredo I come back in the middle of a huge battle with a delorian machine gun and an awesome hot in the passenger seat