Battle camp: The Rescue feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Oct 8, 2010.

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  1. K for me, my older sister's attitude just gets worse.
     
    #181 Fangedwolf, Nov 24, 2010
  2. Lol! Well my brothers are 17 and 19, so they got responsible.
     
    #182 *lady-marian (01), Nov 24, 2010
  3. Mine is 14. She thinks everything revolves around her.
     
    #183 Fangedwolf, Nov 25, 2010
  4. Yikes!
     
    #184 *lady-marian (01), Nov 25, 2010
  5. Si señorita
     
    #185 Fangedwolf, Nov 25, 2010
  6. Lol
     
    #186 *lady-marian (01), Nov 25, 2010
  7. Oh dear me! I believe I've made the decision to "Kill me darlings..." 
     
    #187 *lady-marian (01), Nov 26, 2010
  8. New chapter! Kinda boring, but next few chapters will be action filled! (I hope!)
     
    #188 *lady-marian (01), Nov 28, 2010
  9. You switched to second person at the very end lol
     
    #189 *iPimella (01), Nov 28, 2010
  10. I'm a little fuzzy on second person, can you refresh my memory GlooMi?;)
     
    #190 *lady-marian (01), Nov 28, 2010
  11. Oh, and I posted another chapter. Just a quickie though
     
    #191 *lady-marian (01), Nov 28, 2010
  12. Wait, does second person mean someones narrating in third person? Or something like that
     
    #192 *lady-marian (01), Nov 28, 2010
  13. I lied! I'm not gonna make a fourth book! Sorry!;)
     
    #193 *lady-marian (01), Nov 28, 2010
  14. Another small chapter up!;) a bit longer than last time!
     
    #194 *lady-marian (01), Nov 28, 2010
  15. Awwwe so were all gonna die in this one
     
    #195 german_idiot, Nov 28, 2010
  16. Shhhh! They don't know that!;)
     
    #196 *lady-marian (01), Nov 28, 2010
  17. Another chapter up
     
    #197 *lady-marian (01), Nov 28, 2010
  18. Poor Annabel. And German you totally gave it away!
     
    #198 *Kimber03 (01), Nov 28, 2010
  19. You don't know that I'll kill everyone, I could keep one character alive. If I did it would totally be Matthias. And I agree Kimber! Poor annabel! I had big plans for her!;(
     
    #199 *lady-marian (01), Nov 28, 2010
  20. Oh YEAH!!!! You know when i read this. I tried to do a backflip. My neck still hurts. Owww.
     
    #200 Fangedwolf, Nov 28, 2010
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