Battle camp: the rebelion feedback!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Aug 15, 2010.

  1. Yes but stop after that
     
  2. Chapter 2 is out!
     
  3. Yay u used 2 of my characters, Talon and Jasmine
     
  4. Yay! Can't wait to read it!
     
  5. Repost chap 1
     
  6. Talon is a major but jasmine is just a minor I'm not sure if she will be more than a name yet.
     
  7. I want more! It's suspenseful!
     
  8. I thought I'd be a protected but knife throwing I cool!!!!!
     
  9. Yeah thanks for the character!
     
  10. My character is awesome so far! Good work!
     
  11. Awesome! Thanks for using Pory!
     
  12. Good story!
     
  13. When's the next chapter coming out? (I can't wait!)
     
  14. Soon almost done :)
     
  15. Chapter three is out!
     
  16. Love it! More more more!