Battle camp: the enemy feedback

YEAH NOW SEYMOR WONT HAV TO GET U  (he's a happy monkey now)

 

Hey marrian you need to:
1. Make story longer with more details
2. Find an agent
3. Send to many publishers
4. Make money
5. Dedicate it partially to me, send me a free copy or give me a minuscule amount of profits

 

Yea!!!! But seriously this is publishing quality you make it longer and you could have a bestseller on your hands

 

Trolling

 

Np this and endgame are the two best stories on here in my opinion but there are plenty of storyies with a good enough plot to be published

 

......is mine good ninja?

 

Yours is one that if you extended it and wrote more yes it could definitely become books I've read books that are very similiar in idea to these stories in fact I would say 70% of the storyies on kaw could be improved enough to make a book. However it would take lots of effort and even more for the not as good stories. German when I said endgame and battle camp it's because they are already much longer than yours so they have a distinct advantage

 

I'm ending my Greek mythology story on the forums and starting a brand new one.

 

Don't worry I will. The problem I see with my writing is that it's actually as long as a novel.

 

Awwwe ur just being nice ninja

 

Nope German I'm serious

 

Oh....then yay
ps:seymor is getting restless again

 

For your information...I AM LADY!!!!!!!!!

















jk

 

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