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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Storallelite, Nov 30, 2010.

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  1. Lol but make sure its with a girl.... Lol
     
    #81 Croluxian, Dec 14, 2010
  2. Keep writing the story keeps u interested and their are good combinations like two different time phrases. CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!
    and just asking is my character in the story
     
    #82 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 14, 2010
  3. Hey stora 
     
    #83 *mcGreen (01), Dec 14, 2010
  4. @football yes
    @Mcgreen Hi!!!
     
    #84 Storallelite, Dec 14, 2010
  5. Please note: Chapter 6 will be in 2 parts
     
    #85 Storallelite, Dec 16, 2010
  6. Yay you posted more!
     
    #86 *lady-marian (01), Dec 16, 2010
  7. Yup
     
    #87 Storallelite, Dec 16, 2010
  8. Good job.
    Seth
     
    #88 seth73, Dec 16, 2010
  9. Thx seth
     
    #89 Storallelite, Dec 16, 2010
  10. Realy good cant wait for mo
     
    #90 canadian_nom, Dec 16, 2010
  11. Ty
     
    #91 Storallelite, Dec 16, 2010
  12. Any time
     
    #92 canadian_nom, Dec 16, 2010
  13. Remember your "twisting" Story where i saw from beginning that i am the baddy?
     
    #93 *mcGreen (01), Dec 17, 2010
  14. Hmmm mystery?
     
    #94 Storallelite, Dec 17, 2010
  15. Chapter 6 in finshed.
    I dont know if you guys see it tol but For some reason the words: Glass, Class and Tall(and maybe others too) can't be seen on any idevice instead you see the astrix signs ***. To see it without those annoying *** read it on the comp!
     
    #95 Storallelite, Dec 18, 2010
  16. Ok not tall...
    Test;
    Glass
     
    #96 Storallelite, Dec 18, 2010
  17. WTH?!?!
    G-L-A-S_S
     
    #97 Storallelite, Dec 18, 2010
  18. Ok..the words G-L-A-S-S and C_L-A-S-S are blocked??? Well I can't see them anyway...
     
    #98 Storallelite, Dec 18, 2010
  19. Cool my character is in the story (Karl) good description and a wonderful storyline love the idea and setting keep going!!

    people check out the new story "The Mercenary" on forums page 1 it's a good read 
     
    #99 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 18, 2010
  20. Same here. Woo hoo!! I'm in the story great entrance for my character stora.
     
    #100 Keir117, Dec 18, 2010
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