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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Storallelite, Nov 30, 2010.

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  1. Man I love the story lol the next parts should be the sequel XD
     
    #661 Original_SwordMaster, Aug 12, 2011
  2. Idk.

    Anyway new chapter! Chapter 19 is now finished. Things are going to get really interesting now
     
    #662 Storallelite, Aug 12, 2011
  3. Yay!! I actually had this idea for awhile but I went through it for WEEKS! lol
     
    #663 Original_SwordMaster, Aug 12, 2011
  4. Im not making more of my story until I get on my comp typing on iPod is a pain in my ass

    Just a test

    Glass
     
    #664 Original_SwordMaster, Aug 12, 2011
  5. Glass is not sencored you can write glass w/o putting a period in it
     
    #665 Original_SwordMaster, Aug 12, 2011
  6. Ok
     
    #666 Storallelite, Aug 12, 2011
  7. ༄Write more. Post more. Do more.༄

    iZaln
     
    #667 Nlaz, Aug 12, 2011
  8. Hey izaln have you read take over yet?
     
    #668 Original_SwordMaster, Aug 12, 2011
  9. ༄Yep.༄

    iZaln
     
    #669 Nlaz, Aug 12, 2011
  10. I'll see if I can tomorrow...
     
    #670 Storallelite, Aug 12, 2011
  11. Wombat Combat!
     
    #671 *iPimella (01), Aug 12, 2011
  12. WOOOOMBAAAAT
     
    #672 cheesemuffin, Aug 12, 2011
  13. Yikes...wombat fever lol
     
    #673 Storallelite, Aug 12, 2011
  14. Pimella, I said that line :(
     
    #674 TheSilverPanda, Aug 12, 2011
  15. Why do you keep on writing gl.ass, you think it would be censored??
     
    #675 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 12, 2011
  16. When I first posted the chapters it got censored. I guess they changed it now
     
    #676 Storallelite, Aug 12, 2011
  17. **** you for leaving us waiting for next chapter ;)
     
    #677 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 12, 2011
  18. :p
     
    #678 Storallelite, Aug 12, 2011
  19. I just realized i had made some mistakes as far as colours went. (Like when Evaline "concentrates" and sees peoples feelings or objects that are stimulating those feelings.)
    Fixed a few wrong colours from the last chapter and the chapter 5 part 3.

    Here's a small colour list for reference for the next chapter:
    Red-Angry
    Green-Happy
    Yellow-Bored
    Purple-Sad
    Brown-Bored
    Black-TIred
    Blue-Depressed
    Orange-Agitated
    Turquoise-Worried/concerned
    Pink-Excited or on edge

    If any other colours appear in the next chapter that aren't listed here then they will be explained in the story itself.
     
    #679 Storallelite, Aug 19, 2011
  20. Yay chapter 20! BTW this is the second last chapter. One more chapter left.(unless I add a prologue.)
    Leave comments and what not
     
    #680 Storallelite, Aug 29, 2011
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