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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Storallelite, Nov 30, 2010.

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  1. i'm just forcing this chapter out...i don't like it much :?
     
    #601 Storallelite, Jul 14, 2011
  2. On some of the middle pages when you say glass there is a space of period in between so it says gl.ass
     
    #602 TheCelloman, Jul 14, 2011
  3. ༄Forcing it out?! :0 oh noes!༄

    iZaln
     
    #603 Nlaz, Jul 14, 2011
  4. @cello yeah i know i had problems with the word g.l.a.s.s. back there. It's really big issue because a lot of things are made of g.l.a.s.s.
    @zaln the beginning. it's starting to flow now :D
     
    #604 Storallelite, Jul 14, 2011
  5. ༄Lol cool! But do you know how incredibly wrong that sounds? Lmfao xD༄

    iZaln
     
    #605 Nlaz, Jul 14, 2011
  6. now that u mention it....
     
    #606 Storallelite, Jul 14, 2011
  7. Lol
     
    #607 TheCelloman, Jul 14, 2011
  8. ༄Just saying... Lulz༄

    iZaln
     
    #608 Nlaz, Jul 14, 2011
  9. lol
     
    #609 Storallelite, Jul 14, 2011
  10. ༄Well at least we know this time I didn't say something perverted ;P༄

    iZaln
     
    #610 Nlaz, Jul 14, 2011
  11. for once
     
    #611 Storallelite, Jul 14, 2011
  12. ༄Uh psh... Lol༄

    iZaln
     
    #612 Nlaz, Jul 14, 2011
  13. New chapter is up
     
    #613 Storallelite, Jul 14, 2011
  14. Testing
     
    #614 TheCelloman, Jul 14, 2011
  15. Cool!
     
    #615 TheCelloman, Jul 14, 2011
  16. Ummm....I think there's I testing threads in OT somewhere...
     
    #616 Storallelite, Jul 15, 2011
  17. Hm noticed a punctuation issue...I'll fix it later
     
    #617 Storallelite, Jul 15, 2011
  18. ༄Sweet stuff Stora!༄

    iZaln
     
    #618 Nlaz, Jul 15, 2011
  19. Thx Zaln! :D
     
    #619 Storallelite, Jul 15, 2011
  20. Chapter 18 is up! A bit short but the next few chapters will be long. In total there will probably be about 21-22 chapters. So not much left.

    Pls let me know if there are any mistakes thx! Comments and criticism is welcome.
     
    #620 Storallelite, Jul 27, 2011
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