Atlantric: Unknown Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Storallelite, Nov 30, 2010.

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  1. Ty Irin, I'll try to put more up soon
     
    #541 Storallelite, Jun 17, 2011
  2. Haha good arc-chapter-part-thing lol. Coming along nice. Cool viewpoint changes. Would you be pissed if I imagine Aqua Lad swimming around in your story?

    iZaln
     
    #542 Nlaz, Jun 19, 2011
  3. I like the segment you added to the last chapter. The new one's pretty good too.
    Anyways...
    Moar
    Seth
     
    #543 seth73, Jun 19, 2011
  4. @Zaln Thx! Lol I don't think I'll be mad...
    @Seth Ty, I'll try to squeeze in another chapter.
     
    #544 Storallelite, Jun 20, 2011
  5. But probably pissed! Lol.

    iZaln
     
    #545 Nlaz, Jun 20, 2011
  6. New part up! I was thinking of making one super long part but then decided against it. I'll be putting the rest up later. (Planned 3 parts but now 4 parts total. So two more parts will be posted today.)
     
    #546 Storallelite, Jun 28, 2011
  7. KOOL
     
    #547 FeatherHunter, Jun 28, 2011
  8. thx :)
     
    #548 Storallelite, Jun 28, 2011
  9. bbcode mistake fixed
     
    #549 Storallelite, Jun 28, 2011
  10. Sweet new chapter! Lol Atlantic escape. Hey does the orb get a name?

    iZaln
     
    #550 Nlaz, Jun 28, 2011
  11. Thx! Hmmm never thought about it...but nah...it's just The Orb lol
     
    #551 Storallelite, Jun 28, 2011
  12. Hmm... Tharb! its like "the" and "orb" comboed!

    iZ
     
    #552 Nlaz, Jun 28, 2011
  13. Combined*
    Yup
     
    #553 Storallelite, Jun 28, 2011
  14. No, i wanted the past tense of "combo" not combined. =P I have my ways lol

    iZ
     
    #554 Nlaz, Jun 28, 2011
  15. Lol ok
     
    #555 Storallelite, Jun 28, 2011
  16. Part 3 is up! One more part left then end of chapter
     
    #556 Storallelite, Jun 28, 2011
  17. Yay more to read! Eh hes poisoned?! And post the next addition lol.

    iZ
     
    #557 Nlaz, Jun 28, 2011
  18. Lol i plan to finish this chapter today so yes there will be more....after i eat my late lunch :cool:
     
    #558 Storallelite, Jun 28, 2011
  19. Late lunch lol?

    iZ
     
    #559 Nlaz, Jun 28, 2011
  20. I LOVE PINEAPPLE! I ATE IT FOR LUNCH!

    iLuvPineapple
     
    #560 *iPimella (01), Jun 28, 2011
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