Atlantric: Unknown Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Storallelite, Nov 30, 2010.

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  1. Right after the blue section.. It says
    'I asked
    Keir hit..'

    So yea mistake
     
    #481 *bobsword (01), Mar 17, 2011
  2. Oh it's supposed to be like that, but I guess it looks wrong...I'll fix it, Thanks
     
    #482 Storallelite, Mar 17, 2011
  3. Moar!!!!
     
    #483 *iPimella (01), Mar 18, 2011
  4. *code fixed and sentence rephrased.*
     
    #484 Storallelite, Mar 24, 2011
  5. *link to feedback thread added on story first post*
     
    #485 Storallelite, Mar 24, 2011
  6. Lol thanks :) You're still at the beginning then :p There's plenty more to read lol
     
    #486 Storallelite, Mar 25, 2011
  7. Sorry it took so long! I've been so busy lately.
    Chapter 13 part 2 is up!
    I was planning chapter 13 to be two parts but then I added some more i didn't plan then I realized if I added more I'd be too long...
    So I'll post part 3 later tonight! Or tomorrow....lol
    Btw I didn't edit yet so if you notice mistakes Plz lmk!
     
    #487 Storallelite, Apr 16, 2011
  8. Even electronic brain crystal elderly
     
    #488 KellieKellie, Apr 16, 2011
  9. What?
     
    #489 Storallelite, Apr 16, 2011
  10. Great post Stora! When's the next part coming?
     
    #490 *Irin (01), Apr 17, 2011
  11. Ty Irin! (Btw where have you been?!)I'll try to write more but schools getting busy now
     
    #491 Storallelite, Apr 18, 2011
  12. Sorry I haven't been around. Just got over a couple horrible months of school.
     
    #492 *Irin (01), Apr 18, 2011
  13. Ok I finally got chapter 14 part 1 up. Sorry it took so long! I'll have the rest of chapter 14 up soon i think...
     
    #493 Storallelite, Jun 6, 2011
  14. D: Not enough time to read story.. Must.. Read.. o_O
     
    #494 Smighter89, Jun 6, 2011
  15.  oh noes! Falling forevaaaaaar!
     
    #495 *iPimella (01), Jun 6, 2011
  16. Really good! Suspenseful! Can't wait to find out what happens next.
     
    #496 *Irin (01), Jun 6, 2011
  17. @Smighter I promise it's good
    @Mystique Hehe I love to treat my characters well
    @Irin Ty! I'll see if I can put up the rest of the chapter tonight
     
    #497 Storallelite, Jun 6, 2011
  18. Yay!!!
     
    #498 *Irin (01), Jun 6, 2011
  19. My teacher's two guides to plot:

    When you don't know what to do:
    1) kill off a character or multiple characters as dramatically as possible
    2) Put in a dream sequence
     
    #499 *iPimella (01), Jun 6, 2011
  20. Hmm ty for the tip but what's a dream sequence?
     
    #500 Storallelite, Jun 6, 2011
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