hmmm i can't remember if i fixed those typos or not...lol i'll be writing the next part this week, i might finish by the weekend hopefully :?
The typos? I just copied and pasted the first 5 chapters into Word2007 and found millions of typos and mistakes...lol If u refer to writing...well...there are at least 3-5 more chapters(not including parts) that I have planned. But I want to finish writing the current chapter and the one more.
I didn't see my father til I was in the third grade. Well, see his true forum that is. He told me he was my father, and he'd been visiting me everyday as teachers and strangers. My father is a shape shifter. I was taken from my dad when I was very young, a infant. The Members of Parliament saw me as a liability, a disadvantage, even, to my father, as leader of Atlantric. He became president by accident a mere mix up in voting. Before he was president he was a parliament member. ------- I can do something I call "Telestruction" I can crush veins in people let blood run freely into their bodies, slowly killing them. I can also crush organs and even control peoples bodies. ----- I use a unique weapon known as: Stelonique It's a sword I received from my father that channels telekinesis. I found it in the vault attached to it was a letter saying: "Use this if you have telekinesis" Is that enough stora?