Atlantric: Unknown Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Storallelite, Nov 30, 2010.

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  1. More?
     
    #381 Keir117, Jan 29, 2011
  2. I'm working on it, might be able to post tonight or tomorrow
     
    #382 Storallelite, Jan 29, 2011
  3. Chapter 11 part 1 is up
     
    #383 Storallelite, Jan 30, 2011
  4. I think I should try and catch up... I fell behind around chapter 4 or 5 and gave up.
     
    #384 Starwars6374, Jan 30, 2011
  5. Lol It's 3 pages....so happy reading!
     
    #385 Storallelite, Jan 30, 2011
  6. Chapter 9 has been edited slightly, and some titles and BB Codes have been fixed for other chapters
    You may want to reread chapter 9
     
    #386 Storallelite, Jan 30, 2011
  7. Thx for changing it stora and nice word "Spunk" :L
     
    #387 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 30, 2011
  8. Np Karl  Yes Spunk
     
    #388 Storallelite, Jan 30, 2011
  9. Well I'm not a complete eejit anymore. Yahoo
     
    #389 Keir117, Jan 30, 2011
  10. Lol
    *Btw I've noticed a few mistakes in chapter 11, so I'll be editing it once I get on PC.*
     
    #390 Storallelite, Jan 30, 2011
  11. Hey stora u do know what spunk is right?
     
    #391 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 31, 2011
  12. No lol...
    Well sorta...not really...lmao...just thought is sounded ok....
     
    #392 Storallelite, Jan 31, 2011
  13. Nvm looked it up
     
    #393 Storallelite, Jan 31, 2011
  14. *Chapter 11 mistake is corrected*
     
    #394 Storallelite, Jan 31, 2011
  15. Chapter 11 part 2 is in up. Chapter 11 is now finished.
    I didn't have time to edit yet so I'll be doing that now... If u see any mistakes please lmk
     
    #395 Storallelite, Feb 2, 2011
  16. *Added more to Jerad's view*
     
    #396 Storallelite, Feb 2, 2011
  17. Aw crap. I thought I was done with being taught stuff. Lol
     
    #397 Keir117, Feb 2, 2011
  18. *Fixed a few sentences. nothing major.*
    @Kier hehe lol
     
    #398 Storallelite, Feb 2, 2011
  19. Jared is my favorite character
     
    #399 *lady-marian (01), Feb 2, 2011
  20. Why is the jeered guy calling for someone with a name sounding like mine?
     
    #400 *NecroHyphen (01), Feb 2, 2011
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