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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Storallelite, Nov 30, 2010.

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  1. What?!? Karl loves fish woman??? Making him gay would have Been funnier...
     
    #361 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 22, 2011
  2. Sorry story, lol
    That fact is tied up to another event that will happen later on.
     
    #362 Storallelite, Jan 23, 2011
  3. Fish baby's?
     
    #363 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 23, 2011
  4. 
     
    #364 Storallelite, Jan 23, 2011
  5. *I might be editing a bit of chapter 10 because there was a personality that didn't match with what happened, I'll post when I change it*
     
    #365 Storallelite, Jan 23, 2011
  6. Sweet
     
    #366 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 23, 2011
  7. Wow! Great chapter!
     
    #367 *Irin (01), Jan 23, 2011
  8. Better not be me as I like not being the eejit anymore
     
    #368 Keir117, Jan 23, 2011
  9. Ty Irin
    @Keir do u mean reject?
     
    #369 Storallelite, Jan 23, 2011
  10. Nope eejit. The Scottish form of idiot
     
    #370 Keir117, Jan 23, 2011
  11. Ohh...Hmmm you will have to be an eejit a little bit longer, but your big break is coming soon
     
    #371 Storallelite, Jan 23, 2011
  12. Lol
     
    #372 FeatherHunter, Jan 23, 2011
  13. Awesome chapter! It has got yo be one of my favorites!
     
    #373 *lady-marian (01), Jan 23, 2011
  14. Thx lady, I hope I got enough description in
     
    #374 Storallelite, Jan 23, 2011
  15. MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????
     
    #375 Keir117, Jan 25, 2011
  16. Lol sorry Keir but i need to focus on my schoolwork a bit more. I've been slacking lately and I'll lose my iPod if I don't get good grades...probably...
     
    #376 Storallelite, Jan 25, 2011
  17. *I edited chapter 10 a bit, to try and show Karl's personality a bit more and Sorry story, you're still stuck with fish women lol i couldn't figure a way around it*
     
    #377 Storallelite, Jan 26, 2011
  18. "NOOOO!!! CANT KARL GO OUT WITH SOMETHING/SOMEONE ELSE???
     
    #378 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 26, 2011
  19. Oh fine...I'll go over it again...
     
    #379 Storallelite, Jan 26, 2011
  20. :)
     
    #380 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 26, 2011
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