Atlantric: Unknown Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Storallelite, Nov 30, 2010.

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  1. You won't like it
     
    #301 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 11, 2011
  2. Why?
     
    #302 Storallelite, Jan 11, 2011
  3. You could make the prologue into a telepathic looking into the minds of the fish being killed and being turned brain dead as his mind was inside the fish when it died ( you could probably phrase it better) just a suggestion
     
    #303 Keir117, Jan 11, 2011
  4. Uhhh do u mean epilogue Keir? Because I already have a prolougue lol
     
    #304 Storallelite, Jan 11, 2011
  5. You'll see sorry if I use good ideas
     
    #305 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 11, 2011
  6. Lol u should be applying your good ideas to ur story(Though your story already has good ideas)
     
    #306 Storallelite, Jan 11, 2011
  7. I make good copies :) the mercenary was a copy and I just copied your idea, but I change them and implant them with my ideas and thoughts
     
    #307 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 11, 2011
  8. Lol UA(the guy who wrote the mercenary, I believe unseenassassin was his name before he changed it) is a good writer
     
    #308 Storallelite, Jan 11, 2011
  9. He was cool, he didnt farm me, I just put on the story my thanks for the idea
     
    #309 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 11, 2011
  10. I remember him! Founder of assassins guild i believe? If that was the name. Good friend of mine if i remember correctly
     
    #310 Croluxian, Jan 11, 2011
  11. Hmm I never knew he made a clan, wonder what happened to him...maybe Zaln knows
     
    #311 Storallelite, Jan 11, 2011
  12. oh hey cro i changed some of kaw chronicles i gave the centurion an entire view and changed some stuff from arrias view and cheeses view
     
    #312 FeatherHunter, Jan 11, 2011
  13. Us lot should make a writers clan... That would be cool
     
    #313 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 11, 2011
  14. I could be in the writers editor sub clan but then you'd all just farm me cause editors are @&£€$#!!!
     
    #314 Keir117, Jan 11, 2011
  15. Editors are great... Their there to correct your spelt mistakes
     
    #315 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 11, 2011
  16. I would but i like to war. But i would go along with it
     
    #316 Croluxian, Jan 11, 2011
  17. Really good stora! The ending of the last chapter was really unexpected
     
    #317 *Spottedleaf2 (01), Jan 11, 2011
  18. Ty spottedleaf!
     
    #318 Storallelite, Jan 11, 2011
  19. Sorry for the wait! Chapter 9 part 3 is up! Hope it is as good as Storywriters version
     
    #319 Storallelite, Jan 12, 2011
  20. Was great! Bed time now...;( write more!
     
    #320 *lady-marian (01), Jan 13, 2011
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