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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Storallelite, Nov 30, 2010.

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  1. Ty Zaln! Hope u had a good vacation
    @Story hmmm it'll be hard to get her a burial when they're under the sea lol
    @Cro Interesting....lol I bet u just want to get back at Evaline for shunning Matt. Lmao I'll consider it. I got all the big events but I just can't put together all the small details and small details are the most important...
     
    #261 Storallelite, Jan 9, 2011
  2. @story I got other plans for Karl
     
    #262 Storallelite, Jan 9, 2011
  3. Oh crap...
     
    #263 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 9, 2011
  4. Lol maybe.... I think it would make the story a bit more gripping
     
    #264 Croluxian, Jan 9, 2011
  5. Be nice please... You cant kill him thou, his reincarnation ability stops death
     
    #265 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 9, 2011
  6. Stora have u ever thought about writing a book? Ur stories are brilliant and i think a lot of people would buy it if they heard bout it
     
    #266 Croluxian, Jan 9, 2011
  7. It'll be awhile...I need more planning...
    I'll try my best to keep the action going
    Im really that good Cro?...my grammar and spelling is terrible. I use spell check a lot. Lol I've thought about becoming a writer but I just like writing here for fun.
     
    #267 Storallelite, Jan 9, 2011
  8. If u write it out on comp it will do some checks. But yes i do think ur that good. Plus what have u got to lose?
     
    #268 Croluxian, Jan 9, 2011
  9. Make the story longer and get someone to do editing and you should be fine
     
    #269 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 9, 2011
  10. Freedom I guess, writing here...I can ignore u guys all I want But u can't ignore ur editor! I don't think I'd do it even if u paid me
     
    #270 Storallelite, Jan 9, 2011
  11. OH YEAH
    THAT'S RIGHT
    JERAD HAS THE
    STONGEST POWER
    OF
    ALL
    IN UR FACE
    IZALN
    W00t!!!
     
    #271 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  12. Only problem is Jerad gets headaches
    Every character has a weekness!
     
    #272 Storallelite, Jan 9, 2011
  13. Lol way to ruin a good moment!
     
    #273 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
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    #274 Storallelite, Jan 9, 2011
  15. Lol
     
    #275 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  16. Whats my strength and weakness?
     
    #276 Croluxian, Jan 9, 2011
  17. He gets killed by Eva when he has a headache <-- lolage
     
    #277 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 9, 2011
  18. Lol…NOT FUNNY!!!
     
    #278 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  19. I need to check something here real quick

    Chapter One: (3/3)

    Lynet's View

    As I unpacked my things for the night,I began to cry.
    Not like last time,I told myself,I won't lie this time.This time they will trust me.No one will get hurt.Eventually I'll have to tell him my identity,though.I thought.
    I was Blah blah blah Auras
     
    #279 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
  20. YAY LOL IT WORKED
     
    #280 FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011
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