Atlantric: Unknown Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Storallelite, Nov 30, 2010.

  1. Ty Seth!
    @Keir well when u gave me ur characters personality it gave me the idea
    @Cro to be truthful I don't remember much from mystery...I remember the squeal I tried to make and Lores creation but...mystery is kinda fogy. A few events I remember...I didn't keep my notes from mystery
     
  2. Yeh I suppose, lol
     
  3. Chapter 9 part 1 is up
     
  4. I rock I totally K.O.'ed Zaln
     
  5. I am totally awesome
     
  6. I got captured, just great! -_-

    Nice part/chapter again stora
     
  7. Lol
    U
    Got
    Captured
     
  8. I think its clear that Matt is the best! Like seriously im good lookin and no one can read my thoughts! Even stora cant resist me lol
    Stora it was us bout us 2 bein detectives in high school. And there were 2 large gangs who had a massive war too but thats all i remember
     
  9. Cro, you may think you're the best, but remember.

    Fire will be your demise.

    And great job stora!
     
  10. Hehe! And were under water too so ill be useless lol
     
  11. That's true, I didn't think about that. Maybe there will be an air bubble or something. But Jay said it, so it most be true! XD
     
  12. Lol obv! But evryone likes Matt!
     
  13. @ Matt Everytime I look at a girl (even human they love me instantly)

    @ stora since my family lineage is the only one with powers and junk (in atlantric of course) can look different too
    ie:have a regular face not oval

    Also @Matt I totally look awesome than you
    If you wanna fight we can go but beware the rocks lol
    For jay has said beware the rocks (not really )
    The reason she said that is cause I'm gonna use my telekinesis to smash ur face in with one lol jk
     
  14. Thx guys!
    @Cro I remember now, that gang war took forever to plan outlol
     
  15. Zaln knows he's scared of me lol my guard gave him a good punch
     
  16. @feather sorry can't do. I already wrote it and I planned it like that for a reason. Which you'll see soon I think
     
  17. Sorry guys. Just noticed a few spelling mistakes, I will change it when I get on my computer.
     
  18. i lurv it

    plz click, i give u hug >•.•)>

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    lurv=love
     
  19. Exciting chapter! Very suspenseful ending!