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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Storallelite, Nov 30, 2010.

  1. Chapter 8 in finished
     
  2. Everyone In RL my name's jerad im am the president of the underwater civilization lol seriously he used me for the part.

    Since this'll be about mainly me I took the liberty of saying “I” said

    Here's what I imagined for the next part:
    Master, I bring bad news,A man said.
    I CAN ONLY TAKE SO MUCH BAD NEWS IN ONE DAY,Storallelite. I yelled
    We've captured a group of land-walkers. They are all special,they have…powers. The man known as Storallelite said.
    Does he know about me,no,of course not no one was there but me and father.I thought.
    The leader is a male known as Zaln.Storallelite informed.
    Well why don't we got get him shall we?I said.

    To be continued.

    Can't tell ya the next part only Storallelite may know the next part.
     
  3. Sounds nice feather, I was going use something like that lol
     
  4. Oh yeah btw I'm not a guy
     
  5. When are you writing more? I like it
     
  6. Ty lady!
    Idk when I'm going to write more but I have ideas in my head
     
  7. What sorta ideas?
     
  8. She gave me a spoiler lol
     
  9. Ones that I'm not saying in the forums...yet
    @feather could u delete it? I don't want anyone else knowing I'd rather keep it a secret
     
  10. Can't wait for more!
     
  11. It's coming
     
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  13. Maybe tomorrow....
     
  14. Maybe today Plz
     
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    Seth
     
  16. Why's my guy the buffoon in this story? 
     
  17. Cuz all of us know stora well. Plus stora nd me were best mates in her first story so she had to continue the connection between our characters