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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Kimber03 (01), Dec 20, 2010.

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  1. I dislike Chapter 15 much more than my other chapters. But you know enjoy it if you want. :D
     
    #61 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 17, 2011
  2. You had to cut it off there, didnt you.
     
    #62 *lady-marian (01), Feb 17, 2011
  3. Yup!
     
    #63 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 17, 2011
  4. Sorry for the delay of posts. I've been extremely busy this weekend. But enjoy!
     
    #64 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 21, 2011
  5. This is really good. I read the whole thing straight through. Like u said some were a little short. But they were good all the same
     
    #65 *abigailshores (01), Feb 22, 2011
  6. Wa-Wa-Wa-What? Minor god for real? Or their spirits inside peeps like the twelve kids?
     
    #66 *lady-marian (01), Feb 22, 2011
  7. great chapter
     
    #67 Storallelite, Feb 22, 2011
  8. Wonderful
     
    #68 FeatherHunter, Feb 22, 2011
  9. @lady-marian
    My lips are sealed for now!

    And Chapter 17 up!
     
    #69 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 23, 2011
  10. Noooooo! Hestia!!!
     
    #70 *lady-marian (01), Feb 23, 2011
  11. i never would have guessed that the drunk guy might be important....lol
     
    #71 Storallelite, Feb 24, 2011
  12. Same. I hope he isn't important. I like Hestia better. HESTIA!
     
    #72 *lady-marian (01), Feb 24, 2011
  13. I knew he was important when he grabbed that girl I forgot he name I think it was Lorie something like that... :S
     
    #73 FeatherHunter, Feb 25, 2011
  14. Rejoice! I've reached page 3 in the forums!
    Yes, Chapter 18 is rather short. Sorry bout that. Please read and enjoy anyways though! Gracias!
     
    #74 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 26, 2011
  15. Hmm Dike seems to know a lot. Very interesting personality :) Does Dionysus in the greek legend have "the sight"?
     
    #75 Storallelite, Feb 26, 2011
  16. As in "the sight" to turn people to stone? Or "the sight" as in fortune telling? Neither actually, I just though the glasses were a nice touch.
     
    #76 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 26, 2011
  17. Fortune telling lol, glasses are a nice touch.
    When u first into'd Dike, i thought he might be hercules...but hercules had a lion skin instead of tiger i think.
     
    #77 Storallelite, Feb 26, 2011
  18. I'm actually not positive which animal Dionysus is. I know it's some type of cat, but all the answers I search for online are differrent... So I went with the tiger.
     
    #78 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 26, 2011
  19. oh ok, i'm not totally sure myself...but nice chapter! if i haven't said so yet....but i'll say it again :)
     
    #79 Storallelite, Feb 26, 2011
  20. Lol. Once is enough.
     
    #80 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 26, 2011
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