Ascent of the Gods Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Kimber03 (01), Dec 20, 2010.

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  1. Vice Principal is Hades
     
    #41 FeatherHunter, Feb 8, 2011
  2. *Thumbs Up* :mrgreen:

    Chapter 10 posted! Hopefully I can get a few more posts out in a week for the fact I have Chapters 11-14 written.
     
    #42 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 8, 2011
  3. great chapter! keeping me in suspense!
     
    #43 Storallelite, Feb 8, 2011
  4. Yup I seen Stora post so I thought it was worth something to read and so far goodjob
     
    #44 Undertak3r, Feb 8, 2011
  5. Nice, but I be a bit discombobulated.
     
    #45 *lady-marian (01), Feb 9, 2011
  6. Ever get that feeling when you post a chapter you feel slightly embarassed and anxious to see what people think? That's exactly what I feel for Chapter 11. :oops: Embarassment is a curse I have to face whenever I let anyone read any of my stories.
     
    #46 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 10, 2011
  7. ENCORE
    ENCORE
    WONDERFUL DARLING
    WONDERFUL
    BRAVO
     
    #47 FeatherHunter, Feb 10, 2011
  8. Great job…
    Syrene and the girls are the Sirens,correct?
     
    #48 FeatherHunter, Feb 10, 2011
  9. Yup.
     
    #49 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 10, 2011
  10. Wait a minute... They are the twelve Olympian gods? Not their children? Ugh! *moans and rubs temples*
     
    #50 *lady-marian (01), Feb 10, 2011
  11. They don't have kids lol they are still in high school
     
    #51 FeatherHunter, Feb 10, 2011
  12. I get the embarrassment feeling too! But only if I'm watching the person read it.
     
    #52 *lady-marian (01), Feb 10, 2011
  13. Yeah... I didn't want them to be demigods, but the actual gods (glad you caught on quickly). I don't really get the whole concept either... But hopefully it will make the next chapters less confusing.
     
    #53 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 11, 2011
  14. I've posted Chapters 12 AND 13 because Chapter 13 was kind of short... so, yeah, enjoy!
     
    #54 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 11, 2011
  15. Read em both, both are FREAKING AWESOME!
     
    #55 *lady-marian (01), Feb 11, 2011
  16. Chapter 14 is now posted! :mrgreen:
     
    #56 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 16, 2011
  17. Yay! They are the twelve...
     
    #57 *lady-marian (01), Feb 16, 2011
  18. Lol but there are only 11
     
    #58 FeatherHunter, Feb 16, 2011
  19. Who's the 12th
     
    #59 FeatherHunter, Feb 16, 2011
  20. Nice joke in the middle,
    hoarse voice....lolol
     
    #60 Storallelite, Feb 16, 2011
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