this one viewtopic.php?f=12&t=144858&p=4233064&hilit=+%2AApoca#p4233064 Sorry buddy but there's no way in hell im reading that, looks like a bunch of brick text
Don't use colloquialisms. Proof read. Use paragraphs. Actually learn combat before you write a boring two sentence fight. Don't be so bland. Don't be so generic. And most importantly: Don't write a zombie story.
As requested i removed the spam comment and unlocked it. But the comments placed on this feedback thread are in mine opinion not contributing to the original thread. That's why I locked it. It was brought to my attention that its normal in fan fiction to have 2 threads. That was really new for me learned something new. Ty.