The first one... :shock: (No offense) The second one is pretty cool I'm just worried how tmany character can be incorporated and how they'll come to life w/ limited emotions.
Yeah that's a big problem with the second one. The biggest problem with the first one is that there aren't a whole lot of main characters available.
Conflict: Well, the owners of the company that created emotion get married and have a kid. That kid is rich and has tons of emotions, only she seeks out things from the past to dull her emotions even more, like alcohol. Yeah, that's about all I got. How the characters would come to life and dealing with so many character possibilities: Ummmm... well, we mostly like writing through teenage characters (no duh!), so that would limit possibilities a bit. Um... Characters have emotion on their little card, and they know when they should feel angry, or sad, so they can go over to one of the ATM thingies and start to feel emotion for a certain amount of time, so they would come to life. OOOOH! and maybe they could even purchase portable ATM thingies!
To Stora's defense, we could have a story like Watership Down (I know it's sad but) In the beginning LOADS of bunnies get shot for meat, the rabbits don't know about meat, see the dead rabbits. And they rebel againist humans!
That wouldnt really work because most people aren't adept at personification. Plus the storyline is a little silly
But we could have more then conflict. At first they could have to travel before humans kill them. And there could be stuff about camping, getting food and shizzle
Bunnies ftw! But ok fine I guess bunnies r a bit silly How about: A bunch a cute fuzzy teen hamsters hijack a car and travel around the world they somehow get in a bunny dominated world!We could tell about their adventures!! Or How about we create a new world much like our own but this world is more vicious. People eat eachother...etc etc etc...
How about two pirates called Bob and Fred become friends with a giant talking bunny called Jim and they have to defeat a robot called John Smith that wants to destroy every cookie in the world?
Hm futuristic fantasy.. All 23 planets in the solar system r discovered, but not explored. Jupiter(that's the gas giant right?) has recent discoveries about it. There is a planet inside all that gas but the gas is not only poisonous but also destructive. Inside that layer of gas is a breathable canopy of air. on the planet that is all ocean and lakes and rivers and land with no desert or snow is a civilization. They have pet bunnies!(jk about that part) they practice magic and fighting although the whole planet is at peace with itself. They have no knowledge of the outside world. They are most likely hostile. On Pluto is the only thing that is even suspected of being able to make it through the destructive cloud around Jupiter. On Pluto live the Plutonians. Hive creatures. They have unknown relations. The humans want on Jupiter because 1 the air there is magic-enhancing and 2 there are immense stores of power there. A ship has been dispatched to pluto to get some of that alloy, make a ship out of it, and set up a small camp on Jupiter preferably undetected. That's my idea if we choose not to use it, someone should. I think it would work out good.