Finally I had writers block Acopolys Chap 1 Matt It was a dark and dreaded day the mall. The haven for teens was overrun by a disease and quarintined. Only 1 surviver was unafeacted, Mathew or as everyone called him Matt. Ex marine hard to the core was at the sports center when it had happened. He had grabbed an axe and ran and hid in the staff room. He had made it his base and, found as many weapons as possiblle, and rationd his food. Chap 2 Ghost Oh I woke up with a headache. Felt bad real bad. I grabbed my knife from my belt knew I could die if I wasen't careful. Saw movement and started to crawl backwards. I saw what looked like person infected by some weird disease. I grabbed a jar off the shelf next to me and broke it. The person turned to me and jumped. I threw my knife. It hit it in the stomach and made it fall over. I stood up and walked over to it. I smashed it's head in,got my knife from it's stomach and walked away. Where was Matt? Chap 3 Matt Matt found a gun. Not much, just a 9mm but it was worth something. It could kill a few zombies. That's when he saw him a guy with a zombie on his back he shot the zombie off and ran to the guy. “Did he bite you, " he asked. No was the reply. Then he asked who he was Utho was his name and he knew how it had happened. He said that some guy just ate something that looked like a infected hand and go crazy. He got 12 and the virus spread from there. It was bad near Guitar Center. “Ok," Matt said "we've got to find Ghost," Chap 4 Ghost Where's a gun is what I thought. Where's a gun. I saw to many zombies coming. That's when I saw them on the floor next to me. My riot shield and katana. I picked them up. This will help ,I thought. Then I ran into combat and kill every single one. Then I saw. One was a cop and he had a gun. A M9. I picked it up and ran out. That's when I saw a guy just standing there looking around. I gave him my gun we need to find my backup, Matt. Lets go Chap 5 Peanut He was dead. That's what he thought, what peanut thought when he was swarmed. He remembers the pain of the claws and bites as he screamed. He was infected to fast to feel much pain, but what he felt felt like crazy. He should have gone crazy. Want brains, flesh, and a drink of blood to wash it down. But somehow he held on. He was faster and stronger, so strong the zombies couldn't stop him. He was now their leader. And he was good. He made a resistence against the other zombies and it was growing. He would help save the humans. No matter what Chap 7 Matt He remembered his younger days with his girlfriend whitney he loved her it had been four years four long hard years since the incidente the horrible incidente Utho Matt Matt stop dreaming man come on we gotta go Matt That's when he saw the scene a heap of dead zombies on the floor ghost Matt thought he's close I know it Chap 7 Ghost I want you to join the U.S Army. I remebered that poster I thought at the time cool I shoot guns serve the country and save lives. I never thought it would be so grosome. I remembered the worst part was trying to save Whitney I never would have joined if I knew that would happen but sometimes things just happen, horrible things. I wanted to get home see my girl kimmy. But first I had to stop this before it spread to make sure nothing more happened
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This is good. But it's apocalypse. Lol. And make use of commas, full stops and other punctuation. But yes, you're a very good writer