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Here it is edited Acopolys Chap 1 Matt It was a dark and dreaded day the mall the haven for teens was overrun by a disease and quarintined only 1 surviver was unafeacted Mathew or as everyone called him Matt ex marine hard to the core was at the sports center when it had happened he had grabbed an axe and ran and hid in the staff room he had made it his base and found as many weapons as possiblle and rationd his food Chap 2 Ghost Oh I woke up with a headache Felt bad real bad I grabbed my knife from my belt knew I could die if I wasen't careful saw movement and started to crawl backwards I saw what looked like person infected by some weird disease I grabbed a jar off the shelf next to me and broke it the person turned to me and jumped I threw my knife it hit it in the stomach and made it fall over I stood up and walked over to it I smashed it's head in and got my knife from it's stomach and walked away where was Matt
Here's the coplete edited story so far Acopolys Chap 1 Matt It was a dark and dreaded day the mall. The haven for teens was overrun by a disease and quarintined. Only 1 surviver was unafeacted, Mathew or as everyone called him Matt. Ex marine hard to the core was at the sports center when it had happened. He had grabbed an axe and ran and hid in the staff room. He had made it his base and, found as many weapons as possiblle, and rationd his food. Chap 2 Ghost Oh I woke up with a headache. Felt bad real bad. I grabbed my knife from my belt knew I could die if I wasen't careful. Saw movement and started to crawl backwards. I saw what looked like person infected by some weird disease. I grabbed a jar off the shelf next to me and broke it. The person turned to me and jumped. I threw my knife. It hit it in the stomach and made it fall over. I stood up and walked over to it. I smashed it's head in,got my knife from it's stomach and walked away. Where was Matt?
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This is the next 3 chapters Acopolys Chap 1 Matt It was a dark and dreaded day the mall. The haven for teens was overrun by a disease and quarintined. Only 1 surviver was unafeacted, Mathew or as everyone called him Matt. Ex marine hard to the core was at the sports center when it had happened. He had grabbed an axe and ran and hid in the staff room. He had made it his base and, found as many weapons as possiblle, and rationd his food. Chap 2 Ghost Oh I woke up with a headache. Felt bad real bad. I grabbed my knife from my belt knew I could die if I wasen't careful. Saw movement and started to crawl backwards. I saw what looked like person infected by some weird disease. I grabbed a jar off the shelf next to me and broke it. The person turned to me and jumped. I threw my knife. It hit it in the stomach and made it fall over. I stood up and walked over to it. I smashed it's head in,got my knife from it's stomach and walked away. Where was Matt? Chap 3 Matt Matt found a gun. Not much, just a 9mm biut it was worth something. It could kill a few zombies. That's when he saw him a guy with a zombie on his back he shot the zombie off and ran to the guy. “Did he bite you, " he asked. No was the reply. Then he asked who he was Utho was his name and he knew how it had happened. He said that some guy just ate something that looked like a infected hand and go crazy. He got 12 and the virus spread from there. It was bad near Guitar Center. “Ok," Matt said "we've got to find Ghost," Chap 4 Ghost Where's a gun is what I thought. Where's a gun. I saw to many zombies coming. That's when I saw them on the floor next to me. My riot shield and katana. I picked them up. This will help ,I thought. Then I ran into combat and kill every single one. Then I saw. One was a cop and he had a gun. A M9. I picked it up and ran out. That's when I saw a guy just standing there looking around. I gave him my gun we need to find my backup, Matt. Lets go Chap 5 Peanut He was dead. That's what he thought, what peanut thought when he was swarmed. He remembers the pain of the claws and bites as he screamed. He was infected to fast to feel much pain, but what he felt felt like crazy. He should have gone crazy. Want brains, flash, and a drink of blood to wash it down. But somehow he held on. He was faster and stronger, so strong the zombies couldn't stop him. He was now their leader. And he was good. He made a resistence against the other zombies and it was growing. He would help save the humans. No matter what