A Twisted Fairy Tale: On The Run feedback

Totally understand!!! I use third person, but sometimes I accedemtally write in first person!!!! It's a pain to change!

 

No,that wasn't the end

 

I love the new chapter! I especially love the new character, Peri!!! 

 

Is that ur person lady???

 

Haha me too

 

Yeah I created her!

 

Ah ok

 

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Hey fang symp when ur done with a chapter post on thus to let them now

 

Okay well read A twisted fairytalen the run plenty of chapters to read so far and I'm working on the next chapter,any ideas?

 

Well, maybe tartarus could notice that kellen is getting away, and run after him, the chicks keep fighting, and eventually they notice thst the others left, then, since they both want to find Kellen, they have to work together!

 

That sounds good maybe I will use it

 

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Okay the next chapter is up,sorry it's not long I write as much as I can and along the way when I am putting it in I try to add as much as I can,once again sorry,and enjoy!

-love yours truely Symphoney

 

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