A Raven Among the Doves: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Apr 13, 2011.

  1. Well I'm hitting the sack! (It stole my socks )

    Night!
     
  2. Nice art haha. And gnite!

    iZaln
     
  3. Great chapter despite the dark atmosphere!
     
  4. Nice Chapter!
     
  5. Thanks Irin! There's a writer's bash meeting now I think...
     
  6. Great chapter!
     
  7. FANTASTIC! IT WAS SO...Perfecticious.
     
  8. Perfectitious? Lol wooow
     
  9. Hmmm... Haha since my last review, this story has really taken off on it's own pair of wings (you can choose the alignment ;D). Awesome sauce job!

    iZaln
     
  10. You know...perfecticious...
     
  11. Chapter 16. Probably 4-5 more chapters before The End!
     
  12. Wow. I've written like 3 chapters in 4 days o_O
     
  13. Lol ;)

    ~ FeatherHunter 

    Feather's Post Script: I posted a new chapter of SD (School Drama)
     
  14. ^^New Part, Not Chapter*^^
     
  15. Nice chapter, quite suspenseful
     
  16. I can't wait to read more!