A Raven Among the Doves: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Apr 13, 2011.

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  1. Mm.. I hate those.
     
    #141 Smighter89, Jun 8, 2011
  2. I'm not pleased with this chapter 
     
    #142 *iPimella (01), Jun 15, 2011
  3. It was a pleasant one.
     
    #143 FeatherHunter, Jun 15, 2011
  4. The ending was interesting though
     
    #144 Storallelite, Jun 15, 2011
  5. I actually very much liked the new post! 
     
    #145 *Irin (01), Jun 15, 2011
  6. Wings were a shocker
     
    #146 FeatherHunter, Jun 15, 2011
  7. Lol I didn't know how to put them in, so I just kinda threw them in there
     
    #147 *iPimella (01), Jun 15, 2011
  8. The same thing happened in my book...the dark of the world chapter I threw in the wings
     
    #148 FeatherHunter, Jun 15, 2011
  9. Bump
     
    #149 *iPimella (01), Jun 17, 2011
  10. Chapter 14 is up! I'm glad I finally got it written 
     
    #150 *iPimella (01), Jun 24, 2011
  11. So...sad...very nicely written. I like the transition from the end of the last chapter to the beginning of this one. But still...so sad....
     
    #151 *Irin (01), Jun 24, 2011
  12. Thanks Irin! I love nana!
     
    #152 *iPimella (01), Jun 24, 2011
  13. Your welcome.

    And...she's alive...right? It was all just a bad dream...?
     
    #153 *Irin (01), Jun 24, 2011
  14. You'll see 
     
    #154 *iPimella (01), Jun 24, 2011
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    Berry Berry Nice! Lol.

    iZaln
     
    #155 Nlaz, Jun 24, 2011
  16. Berries? Where?
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    #156 *iPimella (01), Jun 24, 2011
  17. Somewhere in Brooklyn ~

    iZaln
     
    #157 Nlaz, Jun 24, 2011
  18. What? Why brooklyn 
     
    #158 *iPimella (01), Jun 24, 2011
  19. It's the title of my favorite song haha.

    iZaln
     
    #159 Nlaz, Jun 24, 2011
  20. And that's where the berries came from?

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    Chickens and strawberries describe you perfectly
     
    #160 *iPimella (01), Jun 24, 2011
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