A Raven Among the Doves: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Apr 13, 2011.

  1. Actually there are 3 alexes in this chapter if you didn't notice.
     
  2. @Stora
    Plus it's more fun : D

    @Myst
    ...what the heck lol. Alex obsessed much? xD

    iZ
     
  3. Augustus is online in fanfic -_-

    suspicious
     
  4. Nah, just a common name
     
  5. Hehehe I feel special
     
  6. AugustusCaesar was on earlier myst.

    His name is not common in this game because only one person can have each username before having to add numbers
     
  7. No I meant Alex is a common name
     
  8. Really good!!! :D
     
  9. This story is amazing! So much detail. I can hear and see everything. -gaze off in the distance, awed-
     
  10. Thanks for the support!
     
  11. Chapter 12? I think so...
     
  12. I'm a raven at my school, I stick out, which makes me so cool cause everyone is like drones there, following the crowd.
     
  13. Sheep and the goats, sheep follow the goats and not bad... For a FARMER AND STRIPPER 
     
  14. You're story is really good.. :)
     
  15. Great new post!
     
  16. Hmmm... Chapter 13 may be written by Monday... We'll see 
     
  17. D: Why ?