A Raven Among the Doves: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Apr 13, 2011.

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  1. And Danny when he told me that we are just friends. I am making a new story , we can do co-write on it. U can add Anala to the story I think she fits in with the storyline.
     
    #41 *Poisonfang (02), May 15, 2011
  2. Ummm... I don't really have time. Plus I like to keep my characters in one storyline at a time.
     
    #42 *iPimella (01), May 15, 2011
  3. you get the fist bump of approval!
     
    #43 FeatherHunter, May 15, 2011
  4. Thanks feather! I guess I lied. I'm sooo busy
     
    #44 *iPimella (01), May 17, 2011
  5. Tadaaa! Almost a week late 
     
    #45 *iPimella (01), May 23, 2011
  6. Add more or I'll beat you up like what happened to Anala
     
    #46 *ShinigamiIchigo (01), May 23, 2011
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    #47 Storallelite, May 23, 2011
  8. I love near-death threats 
     
    #48 *iPimella (01), May 23, 2011
  9. I got a gun
     
    #49 *ShinigamiIchigo (01), May 23, 2011
  10. Oh dear
     
    #50 *iPimella (01), May 24, 2011
  11. Muahahahahahahahaha
     
    #51 *ShinigamiIchigo (01), May 25, 2011
  12. Uh. It doesnt even make sense
     
    #52 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), May 26, 2011
  13. uh well sux for u don't it
     
    #53 *ShinigamiIchigo (01), May 27, 2011
  14. good story
     
    #54 CoS-Dvoraki, May 27, 2011
  15. Not my best work... Written at 11pm
     
    #55 *iPimella (01), Jun 1, 2011
  16. Write more please!!!
     
    #56 Storallelite, Jun 1, 2011
  17. K but not at 11 again 
     
    #57 *iPimella (01), Jun 1, 2011
  18. Chapter 7 is up. I'm afraid I rushed.
     
    #58 *iPimella (01), Jun 1, 2011
  19. Amazing story.
    At first I thought the title meant it would be religious fiction.
    Like some Christians write books about different religious events and junks.

    Raven=devil
    Doves=angels
     
    #59 FeatherHunter, Jun 1, 2011
  20. Well close but no cigar 
     
    #60 *iPimella (01), Jun 2, 2011
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