A Raven Among the Doves: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Apr 13, 2011.

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  1. And my last question... Is she the only darkwing thing (All that I understood was that there were three classes and she was in the most powerful.)? Because of how she cringed when she opened her wings...
     
    #261 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 24, 2011
  2. The wings will be explained. No there aren't multiple classes of darkwings.

    Rusia is the fairy who I spent like 3 paragraphs describing how she was created lol. She's a new character.
     
    #262 *iPimella (01), Aug 24, 2011
  3. A lot of interesting stuff going on :)
     
    #263 Storallelite, Aug 24, 2011
  4. Thanks Stora! I hope it isn't confusing!

    >.<
     
    #264 *iPimella (01), Aug 24, 2011
  5. Well, I've done went and decided that I am officially the worst writer of the actual writers in FanFic.

    >.<
     
    #265 cheesemuffin, Aug 25, 2011
  6. @pimella Not at all :D
    @cheese you're not, you're pretty good
     
    #266 Storallelite, Aug 25, 2011
  7. Cheese... I think I'm the worst writer, seeing as how I just started writing.
    >.>
     
    #267 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 25, 2011
  8. Ugh I'm considering trashing this. I want it to be OVER
     
    #268 *iPimella (01), Aug 30, 2011
  9. No PIM!!!!!!
     
    #269 *TigerstarandJaystar (01), Aug 30, 2011
  10. Ella, please don't trash it! I promise to catch up later. At the latest tomorrow. Somewhere I gotta be tonight.
     
    #270 *Irin (01), Aug 30, 2011
  11. Don't trash, keep going!
     
    #271 Storallelite, Aug 30, 2011
  12. No!!! Don't trash
     
    #272 Willow564, Aug 31, 2011
  13. You can't trash it! I'm really looking forward to reading more! You can't leave me hanging! I'll DIE! 
     
    #273 *lady-marian (01), Sep 1, 2011
  14. Maybe a new chapter up today... Hopefully
     
    #274 *iPimella (01), Sep 5, 2011
  15. KEEP GOING!

    NO TRASH IN FAN FIC!
     
    #275 FeatherHunter, Sep 5, 2011
  16. DONT TRASH! WE ALL LOVE THE STORY!
     
    #276 RenamedPhoenix, Sep 5, 2011
  17. DON'T*
     
    #277 RenamedPhoenix, Sep 5, 2011
  18. Chapter 8
    EotE

    I am tired
    Gnight
     
    #278 *iPimella (01), Sep 6, 2011

  19. That



    Was





    Amazing 
     
    #279 Willow564, Sep 6, 2011
  20. When you were writing that, were you perhaps eating chips and AWESOMESAUCE?
     
    #280 FeatherHunter, Sep 6, 2011
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