*SQUEALS* How could you think that was boring? It wasn't action packed, but it was fun! I can't wait to see what happens!
I don't have time right now, so sorry if I repeat anything. Pure awesomesause The only thing I noticed besides a very few grammatical errors, is that you left out the setting >.> where is the story taking place? I'd sorta like to know where its all going down. Also, what age are Ana and here friends?
The specific town I didn't name. The highschool is Croton (Which I think I mentioned) and she is currently staying in the Evanae building of a boarding school/summer camp Menderith (which I also mentioned) I believe I mentioned that she was a freshman, now a rising sophomore, but I might not have. If you have any more clarifications feel free to ask.
First of all, AMAZING. I have some questions though: Is Rusie one of the earlier characters? I may have forgotten, but if not, it's weird how she just popped-in. Also, will you be explaining what happened with her wings?
I just love the way you describe things! It's perfect! And you're dialogue is amazing too. I can't wait to find out what happens next, GO PIM!