A Raven Among the Doves: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Apr 13, 2011.

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  1. Why were you confused
     
    #221 *iPimella (01), Jul 23, 2011
  2. From the last two chapters, the bus I guessed got attacked, that's what it seemed like, now it's actually a test or something?
     
    #222 Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011
  3. There were other kids on the bus when they got on, that's who they're fighting
     
    #223 *iPimella (01), Jul 23, 2011
  4. Ok...but why are they fighting the other kids?
     
    #224 Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011
  5. It will all be revealed 

    Right now you're just as confused as the main character
     
    #225 *iPimella (01), Jul 24, 2011
  6. Eh...ok...then...
    Write more! :D
     
    #226 Storallelite, Jul 24, 2011
  7. Chapter 3 of EotE is up!

    Yay?
     
    #227 *iPimella (01), Jul 30, 2011
  8. Awesome 
     
    #228 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 30, 2011
  9. Great chapter! Kinda funny at the end
     
    #229 Storallelite, Jul 30, 2011
  10. I devoured this! It was awesome! What should I call you? I still want to call you mystique!
     
    #230 *lady-marian (01), Aug 1, 2011
  11. Pim or Ella or Pimella... You can still call me mystique if you want to though lady
     
    #231 *iPimella (01), Aug 1, 2011
  12. Okay, I like Pim. So you are now Pim. Forevermore (or until you change your name), you are PIM!
     
    #232 *lady-marian (01), Aug 1, 2011
  13. OH YAY! POST ANOTHER CHAPTER!
     
    #233 FeatherHunter, Aug 1, 2011
  14. I AGREE WITH FEATHER!
     
    #234 *lady-marian (01), Aug 1, 2011
  15. ME TOO!
     
    #235 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 4, 2011
  16. ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASE! It's helping me write my book which means it's inspirational!! :DDDDD
     
    #236 *TigerstarandJaystar (01), Aug 5, 2011
  17. *:'DDDD
     
    #237 *TigerstarandJaystar (01), Aug 5, 2011
  18. Hmmm... I wish I could just finish the next chapter.

    Dark Falcon says hi
     
    #238 *iPimella (01), Aug 14, 2011
  19. Chapter Four is finally up! It's boring, but I just HAD to get it over with!
     
    #239 *iPimella (01), Aug 16, 2011
  20. It's not boring, it's suspenseful.  At least I think that's the word.. I've been up since 4 in the morning...
     
    #240 Smighter89, Aug 16, 2011
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