a love poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by CALIFORNIA_SKATER_GIRL, Mar 30, 2011.

  1. Awesome poems :)
     
  2. love the poems

    Love is something im kinda not wanting to talk about it since well yea problem with a friend of mine ya so my poem for something like this well i have a short but kinda messed up one . Alright here goes nothin

    Like the sun your love warms my heart
    Like the Moon you shine through the night
    Like the snow your love melts my heart
    Like bluebirds your love is a song i cannot forget
    I just don't belong here
    Your love is my only strength
    I gotta go my own way
    I got to move on and be who i am
    I love you
    You are my life



    See my problem now ?
     
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  4. omg how did you do this ?
     
  5. Hotrod that was sweet!
     
  6. I've never really done a "love" poem,
    Atleast, not with love as the direct subject,
    So here's my first try 
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    Can't you see that I'm desparate?
    Can't you see that I'm in love?
    Oh why...
    Can't you see?
    Can't you love me?
    Can't you choose me?
    I love you...
    Do you not love me...?

    My love for you is endless,
    As endless as the sea,
    It's as mysterious as the sky,
    With the millions of stars going high,
    It maybe as twisted as my mind,
    Which someday I will find,
    I want to express it in words,
    But it's so hard to say,
    I can't find a way,
    You're amazing,
    I find you perfect in (almost) every way,
    There are small details which I dislike,
    But everyone has these,
    But no matter what, I still love you,
    You, and only you,
    I won't cheat, I won't lie,
    The three words I say,
    Have been the most true,
    Out of the blue,
    I love you.
    I sing a song,
    In my mind,
    But I speak these words,
    "I love you, will you be mine?"
     
  7. K here goes nothing

    Love poems by SvarClaw

    What hurts the most

    What hurts the most
    Was love
    What hurts the most
    Was trust
    What hurts the most
    Was Love
    What hurts the most
    Was being so close
    And having so much to say
    And watching you walk away
    And never knowing what couldve
    And not seeing that loving you is what i was trying to do


    Another Day another Love

    Another day, Another love
    Has left me , deserted
    Another day,another love
    I can't find him no more
    Living with just regret
    Love was never my strength
    I cant find him no more Another day, another love
    Has left me , deserted



    Being so Close
    I am so sad,
    Despressed,
    Regreted,
    Given away

    What hurts the most ,
    Was being so close,
    And having so much to say,
    And watching you walk away,
    And never knowing what couldve been,
    And not seeing that loving you is what I was trying to do

    I am so sad,
    Depressed,
    Regreted,
    given away




    So that's a collection of my first three poems all are Love poems of course
     
  8. Sorry my spelling stinks
     
  9. love poems

    Your beautiful
    The way your hair shines
    Your beautiful
    Says your eyes as they sparkle
    Your beautiful
    Your smile turned me upsidedown
    Your beautiful
    All your body proclaims
    I'm beautiful
    As if your a angels daughter
    Your beautiful
    The way you move and dance
    Your beautiful
    As you turn to leave
    YOUR BEAUTIFULL
     
  10. How does it feel
    To have your heart ripped from your chest?
    The cold, sad feeling.
    The feeling of depression and regret.
    The loss of passion and vividness.
    I'll ask you again.
    Have you ever felt your heart ripped out of your chest? Cuz I haven't.

    Ok on to a more serious poem.






    Passed in the hallway,
    She gives me a horrid glare.
    What did I do wrong?






    That was a haiku sorry.
     
  11. Anyone else got some
     
  12. Every moment my heart-beats,
    Every second I breathe,
    My thoughts remain on you,
    For you are the one,
    That I have come to love,
    I respect you so much,
    I want to protect you,
    But, I'm so weak,
    While you are strong...
    The way your eyes light up,
    A fire when you're angry,
    An ocean when you're sad,
    I can see so much,
    In those crystal orbs,
    You heart opens up,
    And emotions pour out,
    Every movement you make,
    Is much like a dance,
    While I take your hand in mine,
    The feeling is so divine,
    The suns rays are your spotlight,
    The grass your stage,
    You move as swift as the water,
    As gentle as the wind,
    You're bold, so strong,
    Yet soft and kind,
    You delight in things that are right,
    And stand against the wrong,
    You can express so many things,
    In a few simple words,
    A smile is your trademark,
    Too beautiful for words,
    All I can do is watch,
    Hoping someday I can tell you...
    "You're amazing, it's an honor to be your friend."
     
  13. That's great It makes me wanna go be with my special person keep it up bro 
     
  14. I Luv
    You,you make
    my life full
    I want
    U
     
  15. Awww it won't let me make it into a heart mb
     
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  17. Katie
    You are the sun through the rain
    You make me smile
    I know my love is never in vain
    You make my love worth while
    You are the frosting on the cAke
    Please don't tell me I'm asleep
    If I am let me never awake
    I'll love you forever if not longer

    Love ya 