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I'd do that, but people dont understand

 

I do that when I feel like it

 

I've and i'd and such is good lots of the best books have that

 

I use the two seperate words for more dramatic parts.

 

Awww no tomatoeslol but great post! Im liking Jade, hehe making Tyler beg for lunch

 

I don't like tomatoes either... Did the fish have a name by the way?

 

 or ?

 

Stunning story! I really do hope this will get published someday so I don't have to stare at a screen all day lol loved it! Write more soon?

 

Cuz ur gonna srop writing for a while

 

Err posting* does this mean youll write on vacation and post it when u get back?

 

Okey dokey have a good vacaition then!

 

get ideas from ur vacation