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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Dec 15, 2010.

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  1. Yeah, I didn't want to make it much longer though!!! The next chapter will be much more eventful, I promise.
     
    #61 *lady-marian (01), Feb 12, 2011
  2. Okay!
     
    #62 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 12, 2011
  3. new half-chapter! i hope you like! tell me how im doing on this romance thing! :?
     
    #63 *lady-marian (01), Feb 16, 2011
  4. Very goodish
     
    #64 Empress_of_Shadows, Feb 16, 2011
  5. Jade is having a love and hate thing going with Tyler lol nice post
     
    #65 Storallelite, Feb 16, 2011
  6. Aw... Jade+Tyler=Together Forever! <3 (At least that's what I think should happen.) Nice chapter!
     
    #66 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 17, 2011
  7. @Kimber ...ah... *cough* Caleb * cough* ...ah....
     
    #67 *lady-marian (01), Feb 17, 2011
  8. @Ordo good-ISH?!?!
     
    #68 *lady-marian (01), Feb 17, 2011
  9. Yup:D
     
    #69 Empress_of_Shadows, Feb 17, 2011
  10. Okayyyyyy
     
    #70 *lady-marian (01), Feb 17, 2011
  11. @ the romance comment cuz its kinda :/ between them
     
    #71 Empress_of_Shadows, Feb 17, 2011
  12. Hahaha! I know!
     
    #72 *lady-marian (01), Feb 17, 2011
  13. Oh well, I'll just live in my own Utopian society. :mrgreen:
     
    #73 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 18, 2011
  14. Yeah... Sorry to reveal the ending of the third book their. But if it makes you feel better, she was kinda forced and had no choice.
     
    #74 *lady-marian (01), Feb 18, 2011
  15. It helps.
     
    #75 *Kimber03 (01), Feb 18, 2011
  16. Thats good
     
    #76 *lady-marian (01), Feb 18, 2011
  17. I need to post more often! New chapter will come tomorrow or you have permission to throw food at me.
     
    #77 *lady-marian (01), Mar 6, 2011
  18. YAY! I call the tomatoes!
     
    #78 Storallelite, Mar 6, 2011
  19. Pinapple!
     
    #79 Empress_of_Shadows, Mar 6, 2011
  20. Ummm... Yeah, I've (I have) got a paragraph left to write, so don't (do not) get your hopes up.

    TO AUTHORS:

    What do you think about putting don't instead of do not, or I'm instead of I am in books? 'Cause I've (I have) read a lot of books where it says "I am" and I would've (would have) put "I'm". What are your thoughts on this?
     
    #80 *lady-marian (01), Mar 6, 2011
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