A Game of Secrets Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Dec 15, 2010.

  1. Great post lady! When Caleb kissed Jade I wondered if Tyler would walk in lol Though it didn't happen lol
     
  2. Just like the last chapter... awkward! Still liked the chapter though! :mrgreen: Although if that happened to me I'd probably sue the teacher...
     
  3. Thanks guys, and more awkwardness in this chapter! i like embarassing my MC, have ya noticed?
    :p
     
  4. Any comments on the new post?
     
  5. Ooh!! You wrote more!
    Lol greatest weakness is boys...Aren't boys all deadly to us girls? Or vice versa...Lol
     
  6. Lmao nice and wow.. The teacher painfully put her fee back on while she coyld have transposted back to where she was b4 and got them back easily.. Or transported a couple of times
     
  7. Yeah, Caleb did, but it was quicker
     
  8. And yes, Stora, boys are dangerous! 
     
  9. Im on a roll! more posted! got the beginning of Chapter seven up! :D
     
  10. Bippity, Boppity, Boo! LOL And I can't walk in heels either... I trip over my own feet on flat ground.
     
  11. If I practice a bit I can prance anywhere in them! But I need practice beforehand....
     
  12. Lol payback time! Hehe Poor Tyler...
     
  13. Lmao mixed emotions
     
  14. They bicker more than an old couple...
     
  15. Post more!!!
    I love it!!!:)
     
  16. I'll try, been super busy this weekend!;(
     
  17. New post! ENJOY!!!
     
  18. Yay! I have to admit, not as eventful as the rest, but interesting all the same. I feel sorrt for Brett noe though.