A Game of Secrets Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Dec 15, 2010.

  1. Nicely done Marian, I wonder what she will learn :D
     
  2. Shell learn loads of things!
     
  3. Applause lady. You're writing continues to get better with every story. :D
     
  4. Thanks! I've written more, just need to remember to post it when I get a chance on the computer...
     
  5. NEW POST!

    WARNING: IT'S LONG!
     
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  7. New chapter up! I like this chapter... hehe
     
  8. Awkward! As much as I wouldn't want that happening to me, I liked it. Pretty funny too, in a quirky sort of fashion. :D Smiles make the world go round!
     
  9. Thx Kimber! The awkwardness was noted, but I put my MC through lots of awkward situations so I didnt think much of it. I totally agree with the smiles thing! 
     
  10. YAY!!!! Though that's a situation I wouldn't want to end up in. Lol(person coming in while in a bath tub)
     
  11. Lol and thx Stora!
     
  12. EEEEEEEeeeeek! Havent updated in sooooo long! I'll try and write more often! I apologize for the long chapters, but hey, if this gets published some day.... :D